wow...oh my holy son of a moose! that has got to be the most "kill-myself" storie i've ever read! ITS GREAT! ITS WONDERFUL! ITS STUPINDIUS!(not stupid, "stupindius") hell i don even no if i spelled stupindius right. anywho, this is great. you've just got to write more.-ja!

. AW! I love it, I'm so glad I went to your page today. You're a good writer, this style is different and though you may not describe the scenery, I can see it very well on my own. On that aspect, I think you've discovered something pretty cool here.

This one was Baku's POV, the other was Ryou's. I can't say which one I liked better because they each have their own depth to it. But this one still goes on the favs list.

Goodbye and Goodluck.

Once Again to short hehee. BUt I love the chapter, bUt i guess short is god hehehe. You should make another R/B so I can read it hehe.