wow. That was really cool! I'm really into this-0= Agh! new kitten, sorry! anyway, I'm really into this series, I'm on book 8, brave the betrayal, and apparently book bvh g kitten again. apparantly book 9, inside the illusion, is narrarated by senna. that probably means that the series is almost over. anyway. I really like the poem. it was amazing.

wait...what? i'm confused.

WOW! I didn't think anyone else read everworld! I would talk about it to my friends and they would be like ok.I love mythology and fantasy it's so much fun you can leave everything behind!

Anyways about the poem...I love it it was so the way that i think they all feel towards Senna.

Er. Riiiiiight. Yeah.

nice. I love the Senna\David relationship. I am working on a fanfic which will go up soon on that subject. actually,it's a few.

...wow...you hit the nail on the head...or something...I loved it! :)

KEWLIOS! I like! very creative!

Hm... quite profound, and true too. Wonderful poem. ^_^

Love it. I really do. they ARE her fools, aren't they? It has to be Christopher, and especially David you are talking about. April hates her too much, and Jalil is nobody's fool. (he's my favorite)

I liked it. It was very good.

Oh my god! I loved it! Great, great, use of symbolism. =)

Um. Not exactly very good. April, most of all, is unlikely to say something like this. Not even David would say that. No offense, Roomie ~giggles~ but this gets a 3.

That's OK, I appreciate people who give me their honest opinions =)

I have to agree with RenegadeLegacy on this one. The characters went right out the window and coninuted down the street. None of the characters would admitt it, and most of them don't want to believe it at all.

Very nice poem, i really liked it