 Deth Haunts 2006-04-09 . chapter 9dude! that was the best chappy ever! I could'nt have done better. I LOVED THIS CHAPPY! I hope you do another chappy. |
 ravenslair 2006-04-08 . chapter 9Hi, I just finished this story, and must say I enjoyed it very much. And no, I didn't think the ending was cheesy. You did a wonderful job bringing their budding romance to life. Write more Rob/Rae stories, and I will read them. Nice job, thanks...Gerry |
 Mind's Shadows 2006-04-07 . chapter 9The whole thing is good, not to cheesy. You got their traits and to some of their personality pretty good to be in the spirit of the show to be plausible. As for My stories, Well they keep being scratchy, so comparing myself a little, you’re a good writer in my book. |
 Ravenbbfan 2006-04-07 . chapter 8wow it just keeps on getting better :D |
 WillowSpikey 2006-04-06 . chapter 8oh my god...poor ravin...mean mean robin...all men should die a slow death...just kidding... i love ur story plz keep it up!! |
 Mystyre 2006-04-06 . chapter 1Seems interesting so far...the only suggestion I have right now until I continue reading is that you change the summary. You stated that this is a Raven&Raven pairing, when I believe that was meant to read Robin/Raven. Cheers! |
 then nika said 2006-04-04 . chapter 3heh cyborg is whoa! |
 then nika said 2006-04-04 . chapter 2heh robin's fast |
 alena-chan 2006-04-02 . chapter 6Ah, the suspense! I just can't wait to see how Beast Boy and Starfire will react to that.
This chapter was again wonderful and beautifully written. I absolutely adore how you manage to portay Raven and Robin. They are both perfectly in character and it's always awesome to read their inner thoughts. You're doing an awesome job with portraying those two.
I loved the part with the puppy dog eyes ^_^. That was great and I can see Raven pulling that off... and Robin falling for it... ^_~
So, I hope you'll update soon, because I can't wait to read the next chapter... ^_^
Alena |
 alena-chan 2006-04-02 . chapter 5I'm so sorry for not reviewing sooner, but things were just so busy here. I'm really, really sorry...
So, all I can say is that this chapter was great... really awesome.
The confrontation between Robin and Cyborg was portrayed greatly and I absolutely enjoyed reading that part.
That was so absolutely like Robin and Cyborg... and the conversation between those two was what I like the most.
Okay, I'm off reviewing the next chapter... ^_^
Alena
P.S Thank you so much for the review reply: That really made me so happy and thanks for all the nice compliments. I'm happy that you like my stories... so, thank you very, very much! ^_^ |
 mikeisme 2006-04-01 . chapter 6hey! great story so far, i'm enjoying it immensely. you go kind of heavy on the internal monologue, but not too much that i dont enjoy reading the story.
PS - about the tofu - i'm a vegan, and MAN! if i could find tofu for 1.25$ a pound i would buy 100lb.s! tofu is so expensive, and oh-so-disgusting until cooked. but yea, that IS a great deal - way to be a smart shopper beast boy! |
 WillowSpikey 2006-04-01 . chapter 6YAY! ^^ IM SO HAPPY...wait...how is star and bb gonna take it...PLZ UPDATE SOON! |
 Violet Clark 2006-03-29 . chapter 1I cant believe I havent read this before !
This story is amazing and I really like the way your not rushing into things with Raven and Robin . Everyone is really in character and just .. GREAT JOB .
update soon ok ?!
-- Violet ( who promises to be a faithful reviewer.) |
 alena-chan 2006-03-28 . chapter 4Hey!
You have a wonderful story here and I could hit myself for not seeing this sooner.
The characterization is great and I adore how you describe and portray Raven's and Robin's relationship... and not to forget the slow approach on their realtionship.
They didn't fall in love immediately and you're explaining their thought wonderfully... ^_^
So, basically, I'm loving this pic and I hope to read more soon...
Update soon... or as soon as it is possible for you... ^_~
Alena |
 paprika90 2006-03-27 . chapter 4huh. i thpought i already reviewed this chapter. oh well lol! good chapter. like how they confronted eachother and all. so will their relationship be kept a secret from beast boy and starfire?? enjoyed the chapter and cant wait till you update! ^_^ |