Very cute.

Aww...that was so sweet! _* I liked it! Good job, mate! Keep it up and have fun!

Ps: Em...even though the story was great, you should practice on your grammar, like when you wrote "She throw it at Ben..." it should be "she threw it at Ben...". You might know that already, and maybe it was a mistake (That happens to me a lot...lol), but I just wanted to let you know. Anyway, I really really can't wait for more, so I hope you'll continue with this story...it's really sweet! _*

Take care,

Belle

i loved it!

ah, that was really sweet! ;-) its on my fav. list hehe

hehe. really cute. but didnt u want to send me your stuff to correct the bunch of grammer, spelling and other stuff? lol

off to the next chap