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Dybdahl 2006-06-02 ch 11,	abuseDo you realize that you managed to write a story that was 100% the opposite of what I imagined the followup would be like? I feel more then just a little sorry for Tim, but at the same time I want to hit him over the head and tell him what an idiot he has been. 'Cos he really blew it this time, didn't he? Well, I better read the next story to see how this will end.
Sanqhian 2006-04-17 ch 11,	abuseOh, great way to end it. I can't wait to see how Horatio reacts and how Speed works things out with Eva. Sanqhian
Sanqhian 2006-04-10 ch 10,	abuseGood story. Is there to be more? By the way, in the US Eva can kill Blake and not go to jail. Considering the situation she would be killing him in self defense. Sanqhian
Sanqhian 2006-04-07 ch 1,	abuseA good start. Though you must live in Europe somewhere. 'Whilst' is not a common word in the English language, it is in British. And why can't Delko teach Abbey Spanish? That would be the best time to learn a second language. Will read the next few chapters when I have the time. Sanqhian PS. I never really cared for Boa Vista...
randomwriting 2006-04-04 ch 10,	abuseGood to see Eva made it out of that situation. I was disappointed Horatio didn't shoot the guy when he lunged for her. Hopefully she will recover from this, but I don't imagine it will be an easy road.
randomwriting 2006-04-04 ch 9,	abuseEva's kidnapper is certainly one sick & twisted human being. Fortunate for Eva that she had her phone with her & was able to keep her wits about her as she faced off aagainst her nightmare. "It looked like a fairytale nightmare." Nice line, conveyed her thoughts nicely.
randomwriting 2006-04-04 ch 8,	abuseAn unfortunate turn of events for Eva, to say the least. Making a new life for herself in Miami, only to have her past track her down and that, on top of everything else she has been dealing with. You covered a difficult encounter well, giving just enough information to set the tone.
randomwriting 2006-04-04 ch 7,	abuseInteresting turn of events with the question drugging of the brother. Sad life he's had, nice that he was able to get himself straightened up. Eva clearly had a difficult time questioning him, but her belief in his innocence was nicely conveyed. Nice to see her bonding with Calleigh.
speedmonkey 2006-04-03 ch 10,	abuseAw, well atleast they have the animal. Can't wait for the next update.
speedmonkey 2006-04-03 ch 9,	abuseOh wow another great chapter. Please update.
speedmonkey 2006-04-02 ch 8,	abuseOH MY GOD! you have to update soon.
speedmonkey 2006-04-02 ch 7,	abuseAnother great chapter. Please update soon.
speedmonkey 2006-03-30 ch 6,	abuseAw go Timmy. He stuck up for himself. Good job man. Please update soon, this is getting good.
randomwriting 2006-03-30 ch 6,	abuseNice to hear Tim's side of things. Hard to believe he let himself get in that sort of a situation, but now, having some of the background on what he was going through at the time, we can see he wasn't himself. I can forsee a few confrontations ahead for both Tim & Eva. I can also forsee a very bumpy course. Hope they will be strong enough to handle it. Good job w/ the chap.
randomwriting 2006-03-29 ch 5,	abuseThat was a twist I didn't see coming. His fiancee abusing him? Hard to wrap my brain around that. I can't imagine what series of events led to that, but I'll be reading along to find out. I'm curious why Lara showed up in the first place & is back working in the lab. Was it a surprise to Tim or did he know she was coming? And now the mystery of Eva's brother in custody... You have a way of keeping the readers on their toes.

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