You know what I hate? Good, well-meaning stories that get more than 12 reviews for one chapter, that don't continue. *scoff* Oh well, enjoyed it despite there not being anything else. Unless of course, you're waiting for that certain... something?

Good idea? Check. In-character? Check. Well-written? Check. Soon to be updated? Che... (sees publish date) ...Oh. Damn.
I don't suppose it's too late to request an update, is it?
ReaperRain

Mozenrath a hero? Can't wait to see the streetratss reaction to that. Hahahahahah It's going to be priceless.

I love the plot idea; curious to see what you're planning with it. :) The style reminds me a lot of the TV series and the dialogue sounds very accurate. Anyway, putting this on alert and I hope you decide to continue!

Interesting start. I hope you continue this, there are so many possibilities. :D Your story's well written too.

Very diffrent. The plot is good, the flow is also good. I enjoyed reading this a lot.

Wow, this promises to be excelent! You write vary well, and this is a pleasure to read. I can't wait to see what happens next!

O...this looks interesting...update soon please!
~ISP~

Oh I love it! Mozenrath as the hero just tickles my fancy. Poor Xerxes, all confused ;)

~Samirah la Entertainess

I am much intriguied.
(Though God knows I can't spell that word)
I'll be watching for your update.

I look forward to seeing what the plan is, and how it works out. Please update soon.

Great story! I can definitely see each of those characters saying those lines. Please write more soon!

Okay, this looks interesting. I definitely want to see how Mozenrath can turn the situation upsidedown so that he's the hero.

I like the dialogue between Mozenrath and Xerxes. Their actions and movements during it supported what they were saying and were in character.