   xXEnergizerBunnyXx 2008-10-28 . chapter 19I loved this story! I like how you made Serena really cool and strong and stuff. I think that you should have made her kick mars' ass though. |
 AngelONight 2008-08-15 . chapter 19awesome story, very emotion-y
nice ending, if only slightly confusing
i liked how the shortness of the chapters actually made the story much better
really great story, and nice writing |
 Maggie 2007-12-11 . chapter 4 I love this story so much! I really like the cliffhangers at the ends of the chapters! |
| Megan Consoer 2007-05-10 . chapter 19 I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? |
| Kaidaia The Run Away Advent 2006-12-03 . chapter 19 very wicked chapter... this story is so wicked their should be a sequel |
| Kaidaia The Run Away Advent 2006-12-03 . chapter 18 very wicked chapter |
| Kaidaia The Run Away Advent 2006-12-03 . chapter 17 very wicked chapter |
| Kaidaia The Run Away Advent 2006-12-03 . chapter 16 very wicked chapter... are the three lights going to be in this story? |
| Kaidaia The Run Away Advent 2006-12-03 . chapter 15 never give up |
| Kaidaia The Run Away Advent 2006-12-03 . chapter 13 very wicked chapter... are the outer sailor scouts going to make a appearacne |
| Kaidaia The Run Away Advent 2006-12-02 . chapter 12 very wicked chapter... so far you should write a sequel |
| Kaidaia The Run Away Advent 2006-12-02 . chapter 11 very wicked chapter... never give up |
| Kaidaia The Run Away Advent 2006-12-02 . chapter 9 very wicked chapter |
| Kaidaia The Run Away Advent 2006-12-02 . chapter 8 very wicked chapter |
| Kaidaia The Run Away Advent 2006-12-02 . chapter 7 very wicked chapter |
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