You describe winter weather very well (even if it is through Zim's miserable POV, I can relate).

I anticipate the sequel!

I could see Dib becoming addicted to medication. It's scientific, legal, and in great supply, at least in a household like his.

Quote - There was another long silence, almost broken by the subtle sound of Gir breaking something deep down in the depths of the lab, but Zim only cast an annoyed glance in the direction of the noise before turning back to look at the sliver squares on the floor, "So what else happened?"

I like scenes like this, where Zim feels casually dismissive towards GIR's sillyness. I also like how Zim had to agree on how creepy Dib was (he is kind of creepy in the show).

Agh, Dib as a self harmer. I also dislike the whole hovering-over-your-dying-body perspective.. Buut I like this fanfic. So I shall continue on!

It was a little rough to get to this point, but all of it deffinately paid off. There were several slightly-OOC moments, but now, though this is very OOC from the original Zim, this is very, very well done, very raw and sore and tired and angry, very much like this new Zim is an OC. I like it.

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The first couple paragraphs to this chapter make me laugh aloud. I like your writing.

Ooh! I look forward to the next chapter, Sideos.

lol. the teacher's name is Root (also "Beetroot" [snicker])

I didn't get that reference until later. I love Artemis Fowl. And so do you, apparently.

Nice work. I will continue reading

-the silenced

My life is better now I have the next chapters of this to look forward to.

Also, BUNNY EARS!

Yeah, man, yeah! SAY NO TO Ms! AND M&Ms! AND LSD AND As!

Hum. Yeah, I like the "over the stars" reference. Yay unintentional references!

Injectiony stuff, here I come.

"You dare insult Zim's tolerance of...stuff!"
HA!

I like this...I can tell this will be interesting...Wow. I am typing this like I am drugged. Weird.

Hey, is Mr Root based on anyone ;-) Cause he's my evil Spanish teacher.

I liked how Dib and Zim fought over the smallest things. That was good. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Zim on drugs...that IS a scary thought...
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Dlbn

Hemp waffles are to die for. -drool-

Zim, you goobernut! Ah well. DIB SHALL FIND YE!

Truancy officers.. I shudder to think of my fate if I lived with such things. I pray such demons will never arise.

Hah Hah! Dib and a vodka bottle. Oh my.

Ice cubes. That is so ridiculous. I absolutely love it. Bet it works, too. Did somebody tell you that from like personal experience, or did you just think of.. Oh yeah. The author's note. Riight.

Cutting wrists are so cliche. And it wasn't that discriptive or awful or whatever.. Maybe I'm just insensitive. Ah well.

Self-harm is so interesting because everybody does it. Whether it's mentally or physically, we beat ourselves up, hurting ourselves. I don't think there's anything wrong with it. I mean, half my friends do and they are amazing, I love them, and it's not like it's fatal or anything. NEXT CHAPTER YAY!

It was rather obvious why he wore those arm warmers (in your fanfic I mean) and gave such a short answer when Zim asked about it.

Hey, you're right.. HE WAS WEARING ARM WARMERS. I like warmth.

Kay, I am so in love with your disclaimers its not even funny.

A tad cliche (dude, what are the chances of Dib finding Zim lying in the middle of an icy dark creepy alley?) but all right I suppose. Dib's so cute ahaha.