hee. i like this one.
i can definetely see it happening, it played out so clearly while i was reading it...yeeah.

Yayy! A baby! Love it.


Angelwarrior1

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Oh, I also put a quote from OWA in my profile and cited it - if you'd prefer I take it down please PM me and I will. Thanks!!

That last one was hilarious!

I really loved both OWA and the snapshots. Truly excellent storyline and writing.

If you're ever in the mood for another snapshot in this uni; I'd love to see the will readings. Both his friends reactions and also dumbles to NOT getting the potter fortune and to Harry having outsmarted him.

also one where Ash & Haze drop in on the bank post the 'deaths'... maybe house shopping...
Those scenes would be really fun -- if you're ever in the mood for another short!

THanks for the story and for your website, I really enjoy your writing, so far i've not come across anything I don't really absolutely enjoy.

Paula

*GIGGLE* Oh my. The last chapter was absolutely precious. I'll never forget the image it presented to my, that last line.. Heehee.. XD

O_O Did Severus really say that?! OMG! But these are nice snapshots. ^_^

this last oneshot has to be one of the most amusing things i have read for some time. oh, i just love severus.

Ohh, you should do a little story on those two weeks. *wicked grin* I'd love to know what Tom does to Harry.

HAHAHA! This is great! Wow, Severus actually WATCHED them?! How interesting! *grins* It's interesting how Severus treats Haze differently from Harry. I mean, after everything they've been through I can understand it, but I wonder if it felt odd to watch the young man who he knows WAS Harry have sex with the man who WAS Lord Voldemort. Perhaps enough time has passed that he doesn't really think about their past identities...well, actually he'd have to in order to still be close friends with them. But maybe that doesn't bother him. Lol! I love what he says at the end. Hehehe! So, is Tom or Ash having second thoughts about kids? I mean, they do still have time to wait it out they don't have to rush, right? It is a big decision! They can't go back after it. And once they have kids I don't know that they can go at it like rabbits, especially when their kids get older. ^-^ I'd really like to see if they're going to have kids or not and how life is for them in their new identities. But of course, even though I want a sequel, it's completely up to you. I mean, if you think it'd ruin the story then that's understandable.
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LOL! This is great! Okay, so did I miss that part in OWA when Haze and Ash are married?! *blinks* I mean, that's absolutely wonderful, but I feel like I didn't read anything stating they were. Hmm...perhaps it was assumed. Maybe they had mentioned it once before their new lives and I just missed it. *shrugs* Anyway, so cute! REALLY!? Kids!? Wow...that would be interesting. It might be difficult for them to raise kids and be honest with them. I mean, they'll never be able to tell their kids who they REALLY were. And what about the fact that they're both men; would their kids be outcasted at Hogwarts (or any place in the wizard world)? LoL! I think that's hilarious that Haze agreed to that. Tehehehe! I can't imagine them with kids though, for some reason. And gosh, I don't even want to know what Hermione would say about that. *rolls eyes* I mean, it's not like their love for each other would change if they had kids, right? But I guess we won't know *sniffles* unless...there's a sequel, right? ^_~
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Aw, what do mean it's no big deal?! In the end of OWA Tom didn't propose or anything! It would've been cute. I can see where Ron's coming from. I actually wish there were more scenes with Ron and Tom (or Ash) talking about Harry and knowing his feelings about the situation and their relationship. I suppose it didn't have much to do with OWA at the time, but now that Ash and Haze have their own lives together--new lives--I wonder how things will change! Like how did others take Harry's death? How has Hogwarts changed since Dumbledore died? I guess those aren't important either.

What about Ash and Haze's daily lives; what do they do now that they no longer have a war to fight and a part to play in a prophecy?? That's why it would be nice to have a short sequel to see how their lives are now that they've been given a second chance. ^-^ And it would be incredibly adorable to see them getting married!

Oh, Hermione has met Haze but does she know about Ash? Does she know Ron's "new mate" Haze is in love with Ash (a boy)? That might be another reason she doesn't like him. Anywho, very interesting again! ^_^
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Wow, this scene was very interesting! Especially seeing Hermione's reaction. I can understand how the guilt played at her since they hadn't gotten along that year anyway. Although everything can't turn out perfectly, I wonder if Harry considered the guilt inside her eating at her insides when he decided not to clue her into the truth. I mean, she definitely would've messed things up if she had known, but at the same time, how will she move on from thinking she failed him? Ah well, I suppose that really isn't Harry's problem, or his fault. Perhaps if she had been more understanding throughout the year it wouldn't have been so painful for her then Harry wouldn't have had to use the tactic of telling her the prophecy. Hmm...those last two lines...WAS she somewhat in love with Harry? Or Ron? In the end of OWA she was horribly upset at Ron for "replacing" Harry's new identity with their best friend. SO perhaps she really did love him deep down inside--a romantic love perhaps that she never planned on endulging. Very interesting!
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Hehehehe! I like this scene when Tom takes over Harry's body! ^_^ That was really funny. It's a great idea to put snap-shots of scenes you didn't use; that's very interesting! As you can tell, I'm still hoping for a short sequel to OWA or something (and yet a part of me is worried that it might expand it TOO much, but yet another part wants to see Tom and Harry together again). *sighs* Ah well, I'll continue these scenes now! ^_~
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