Wow! This si very good! Keep up teh good work!

Lyah

good story! i loved how you used like the song parts and then you made it cool when its in first person and its an internal conflict (which are always cool ]) lol...Great Job! UPDATE SOON!

yay! GC!

good ficcy... i liked it a lot (sorry for the lack of capitals)

That's really good, I love your last two lines in both Hold on and My Bloody Valentine. They're very... 'powerful.'

Hey, I found the other one! I love your fics. Such good songs. More!

again a great job! loved it!

i have a Fall Out Boy songfic called "7 minutes in heaven"

on to your next GC fic!

i no this as a oneshot, but i reckon u should consider continuing it, cause it's got a lot of potential, it sounds like its going some where