MCR SONG! lol

that was so sad, i love the way you wrote it

This story is REALLY good. It reminds me of 'Cemetery Drive' by My Chemical Romance, which I'm listening to right now. Ecspecially when he goes 'I Miss You...'

I miss you

I miss you so far

And the collision of your kiss!

That made it so hard,

Made it so haard...

I love the story

(The lines are from 'Cemetery Drive')

omg! so sad! it's a little confusing at times but by the end i think i started to get it... Malik and Ryou are spirits going back into their old house and retaining a bunch of memories right...?

Wow!

This so so pretty! I actually really like this Robyn, it's so well written and poetic and... blargh... *drools*

My stupid English teacher Rodney would have a heart attack if he read this writing goodness. But he will never see it. It's too good for him.

It's so pretty, it's going on my favourites.

Though I do have to wonder about your comma use... I'll ask about it in MSN.

Well... that is one depressing kind of a story...