Hehehe.. so funny! I love the ending.. Rodney should learn not to eavesdrop. Great story!

lmao! i love it! poor mckay! actually .. genius mckay!:X:X love it how you wrote it from his point of view.lol.
*gg* wicked smile:D:X:X

haha, i had to laugh at the end. very well written!

Love it :)

Your story is so very, very good. the story is good you write like-- i can´t find the right words--
but the most important thing: it´s so romantic, so peaceful, lovely
i have read a lot of story but seldom something like yours
go on, great job. :D

That story like... totally rocked. (i'm channeling my inner teen here). I totally loved it.
I think it needs a sequel... but then i always think that.

i really enjoyed this fanfic! lol, i'm on my way to see if you wrote any more SGA fanfics, but i wanted to say this was really cute! if you haven't already, please write more!

I love this! It's absolutely adorable with a lovely rendition of McKay. Well done!

Great story! You nailed (no, not that way) Rodney's character. Write some more!

made me laugh outloud, very well written

How much do I love this fic? I really enjoyed this third person view of Sparky, and you've got McKay's reactions spot on. I can picture him fighting the urge to pee because he wants to know what's going on in Sheppard's doorway! This is one of my favourite Sparky fics. Thanks for such a great read.

Great story. Well written and made me laugh. I love McKay and Sparky so it was fab. Keep up the good work :)

hahahahha... classic!

That was great! Oh man, I knew Shep was going to say something, lol. I liked the image of Mckay being caught like a "proverbial deer in headlights" lol. Nice one ^_^

This was great! Wonderfully written!