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Reviews for: The Very First Shot
SHADOWCUB
2006-04-15 . chapter 4
GO SNAPE!
CelticHeiressFiona
2006-03-29 . chapter 4
Oh dearie me, this'll be interesting to watch! This chapter and the last were really good! Update soon!
duj
2006-03-29 . chapter 4
Well, Neville's certainly taking responsibility for his decision and living with the consequences.
duj
2006-03-29 . chapter 3
How did the Death Eaters find them?
Possum132
2006-03-29 . chapter 4
Intriguing!
Dragonero
2006-03-25 . chapter 2
Snape really has problems! The story is really good and very well written! I wonder how ryan came to be in the first place and why snape is living with neville! What will snape do with a child? Does he want him only because ryan is his or because he wants an heir or because hermione didn“t want him to know the child?
What will hermione do once she finds out snape has his son?
Where will the story head? Will hermione and snape find togehter? Will the muggles survive? Will snape be able to keep his son save and give him the childhood he needs?
Waht about the problem that hermione has obliviated the muggles ryan lives with? They really think he is their son! Wel, please, update soon, so I get an answer to a few of these questions!
duj
2006-03-25 . chapter 2
Curiouser and curiouser. However did he and Hermione get together long enough to have a child?
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