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| little sis 11 11 2008-06-19 ch 9,  | abuseI love it,but you could haver done more with it. |
| My-Arabian-Knight 2007-11-19 ch 9, | abuse*Sob* This story was so BEAUTIFUL! It made me mad when Steve hit Johnny, poor johnny didn't do anything. But then it made me happy when Steve saved Pony. . .YAY STEVE! IT made me want to cry! It was like a romance story with out the romance! I love your stories, i'm not sure if i said that already. . . but it's true! I love Pony's character in all of them, and his relationship with his brothers! Happy Thanks-Giving! :) |
| angeloves1 2006-09-01 ch 1, | abusethat was good. Poor POny. Lpve ya Angel |
| Hairspray07fan 2006-08-12 ch 9, | abusePlease writ more it was a very good story and i would like to find out if Darry call the girl that works at the campsite and how pony takes it if the start dating and what soda thinks of them dating and if steve and pony start to fight again and i love the story and would like to find out what happens to the others I would like to say that this is one of the storys that i like to read i have no idea how many times that i have read this story. You are a very creative writer and i also have ideas that might work on your story and read more about it and learn more about the girl that works at the campsite and how Darry thinks about the girl and what happens to them. sincerly i love the harry potter and the outsiders |
| XAmberX 2006-07-15 ch 9, | abuseAwesome!! Can't wait till the sequal...Update pony's angel soon! |
| PissedBeyondRecognition13 2006-07-15 ch 9, | abuse=-O HOW?WHY?WHY?!Why end it like that! gr...Anyways great chapter! I wish you hadn't of ended it though. lol. great job! PissedBeyondRecognition13 aka Jasmine |
| Maddiecake 2006-07-15 ch 9, | abuse:] Work on the spelling, and good job! |
| soda'slover 2006-07-14 ch 9, | abuseI love this story!!It had a great ending,really dramatic(*applause loudly*)Keep it up! |
| WhotheFdoIlooklike? 2006-06-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is the most Stupidest story I've ever read! not that I read alot anymore, I atleast go out and play Football and Hockey instead of wastin' my time writing stories. Oh wait, I am writing a story but, more original and not with the smae characters in the Outsiders! Jeeze, get real. You might think I'm mean but, it's for your own good. Plus, what the hell is "Nite"? and you think: "Darry sat on the bed and pulled Ponyboy to him. He lay down and after a few minutes, he felt his little brother curl into his body as he finally fell asleep. Soda came in and lay down on the other side of his brothers." Is cute? Comeon, somebody has to come along and write a more violent, pornish, gay story! If ya have any problems, feel free to E-mail me. If this Email writning thing made me write my Email for nothing, then I'm gonna get ** and somebody's gonna get hell! |
| Ruto177 2006-06-20 ch 8, | abuselove it Darry's my fave character! |
| lady rose 05 2006-06-18 ch 8, | abuseThat was another great chapter hope you update soon |
| megan bicknell 2006-06-17 ch 8, anon. | abuseplease write more |
| lae10 2006-06-17 ch 8, | abusethis was a great chapter. i cant wait for more. pleez update SOON! |
| SuperDope 2006-06-17 ch 8, | abuseThat was good! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON, Jules |
| PissedBeyondRecognition13 2006-06-17 ch 8, | abuse::sighs with relief:: Well that was a lot to take in! Great job on this chapter, it was so COOL! lol. Update asap! PissedBeyondRecognition13 aka Jasmine |