Whew! I was scared for a second ^_^. I'm glad Seto is trying to see past Asana's family. I was scared he was actually going to throw her in the dungeon! Wow! You're already done with part4? I am impressed. I wouldn't be able to keep it up like you have. Well I can't wait for part 5! I look forward to it.

Steve

*crosses fingers* COme on Asana! You can do it! Please let Seto give her a job! DON'T MAKE HER GO BACK TO THAT PLACE!! Cute how Mokuba wants to call her big sister... is this forshadowing for the future? hm... nice chappy ^_^ please update soon!

Steve

Yey update. Ah... that is so cute and sweet how Mokuba is willing to forgive her like that. I cant wait to see what happens next.

Aw, Mokuba got the courage to ask Seto! That was a good idea. Now I can only hope Seto actually helps her. He won't say no just because of her family with Noah will he? I hope he helps her ^_^. I'm glad Mokuba's getting confidence.
That's terrible! Mokuba's back hasn't healed that well??! OH NO! The poor guy. Please update so I can hear (er read) what happens next!

Steve

Whew! I thought for sure it was going to be that creepy guy (sorry I'm to lazy to go find his name). I'm glad Asana finally got the guts to leave that place. I just hope Mokuba can help her. Interesting that she was wearing a dress she got from Noah... It makes me wonder a litle. Anywho, keep up the great work! Can't wait for more!

Steve

Aw, poor Mokuba. And I thought he was done with his treatments too. The poor guy, He goes through soo such pain. At least he keeps a good face up^_^. IT must be hard to go to those treatments after he thought they were done for good. OH NO! Who's there! IS it that creepy perverted guy!??!

Steve

Thanks for the quick update. I cant wait to see how seto and Yami are going to like this.

wow what is going to happen. PLEASE update soon, please i need to know.

I really like this chapter cause it lets me understand Asana charator. I think it is a good thing that Noah and her are close. Well please update soon.

thats really sad what that man did to noah, even though i dont like him its still creepy!! And poor mokuba! but at least his brothers are there to help him.
i know what you mean about the renaissance festival, i have worked at one in oregon before and i agree that they are a bit pricey, but fun ^.^ its a good idea to incorporate things that you have really done into your stories makes um feel more real.
well can't wait to see what happens next, great work. Arra

Yey. Does this mean seto may start to expected Maura. I hope so she seems like a nice kid. Anyway I have to go bye.

YES! *gives Yami warm chocolate chip cookie* Yami saves the day! That Herman guy gives me the creeps *shivers* But nice chappy ^_^. Anywho, keep it up and *pulls out stick* update!!

Steve

*don't ask about the stick*

Yikes. Oh No poor mokuba. I hope everything turn out to be ok.

NO! NOT MOKUBA! *starts crying* I feel so sad for him! Why do Seto and Yami always have to fight! gr!*sniff* I wonder what Maura and her coolio friends are up to. hehehe. Course I would have second guesses if I was at a fair but that's not the point. Anywho, you have an awesome way of describing things. update soon!

Steve

OO-Lala! Samantha's pulling the moves. tehe. It's really sweet that Mokuba wants to spend so much time wtih Seto and Yami! That is such a cute younger boy's feeling towards his older bros! Interesting that Maura goes off with her two new friends... I wonder what ur plotting... Awesome chappy keep it up

Steve