SO MUCH ADVENTURE! SO MANY YOUTHFULL ALIENS!! OH, I SURE CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER! KEEP WRITING STUFF LIKE THIS USING THE VERY YOUTHFULL FLAMES THAT BURN WITHING YOUR YOUTHFULL HEART! FIND THAT YOUTHFULL INSPIRATION AND BEWITCH US WITH YOUR SKILLED AND ARTISTIC YOUTHFULL WRITING! Also remember that no matter where you write, I'll be there, reading your stuff to the very end.

Plz write this really good i really like it

This is decently one of the most underrated stories I've ever read . As for the Ben 10 crossover title I like the name Counterparts the best.

I nice title for when they meet would be flip side of the same coin.

This is an amazing peice of literature. I thoughly enjoy your writing style (far superior to anyhting else the other users on this site could come up with). Just fine-tune the spelling and grammar, and it will be perfect. I do have one suggestion though. Try to make a smart-yet-weak character like graymatter. I think Jeremy could put it to much better use.

Great story I can't wait for the next one.

I think Couterparts is a good name it straght foward and to the point and it a real eye catcher an my opion to any fan of the series and your story.

good story and I glad that you didn't stop doing it.

Please update soon this is so good

The story is awesome! The only problem is you haven't updated for a week. Pleasse update!

oh boy that message is like someone spay pianting hey Stupid Aliens I dare you to invade earth on a space probe.

Great chapter its seem your making quit a few of your alians reptiles I love reptiles to but it still lacts some orignality

Also I'm going to assume that Alpha is an alien simlar to Grey Matter the only differents is that he has psychic ablities I say this because of fact you said in the first chapter that despite all his talk he still has not shown his form to jermey so he eiter smell alien or he thinks his form is so ridiculus that he's ashamed to show it to anyone,

Plese replie to me by mail if don't spoil anything about story

Great work on this chapter. Update soon.

This good plus a mystery villan I like.

This one best been Ten Stories I've read, I've read all the chapter and impressed so keep up the good work also will have Primorphial appear an this chapter I funny ideal would be to see his reaction to morphing into a female, also do have plans to have Jimmy meet ben when has the omnimatrix it would be cool to see the Infimatix vs the Omnimatrix out of a misunderstanding or Blackmail which ever more convient.

please have hum also meet ben once. please have ben with his watch too