Dean does need to keep Sammy at any cost.

This is heartbreaking and fucked up and beautiful and perfect!

I know it is an old story now, but I just saw it...

This is so good that I could not help but share a review. Beautiful, just beautiful.

That was so insanely brokenly, hauntingly beautiful I don't have the words.

Oh...oh DEAN. Oh Sam.

Fuck.

Wincest isn't even my thing (much) but THIS. This broke my heart and shattered it into tiny pieces. The sheer emotion in this fic took my breath away.

Dean lies very still. He can still feel Sam's body against his own, that lean length, all elbows and muscles and knobby knees. Feel Sam's breath against his face. His lips burn, feel weirdly numb. He touches them with his fingers, and can't feel it.

THIS.

And he does, still frozen on the edge of the bed, a rivulet of water dripping down his cheek from his wet hair and shivering in the air conditioner's blast, while Sam shoves crap into his bag, zips it briskly. Sam is leaving. Sam is leaving HIM. Again. It has the flavor of memory to it, dull and nauseatingly familiar. But he can't move. If he moves, something inside him will break, something he can't put together again, patch up and Bondo and pretend is all right again. If he stays very, very still, he won't break.

And THIS.

He wants to cry, but his eyes are dry. Wants to scream, and all he can manage is this breathy voice that doesn't even sound like him. "You can have it. Whatever it is you want." He's on his feet but doesn't remember getting there, just all of a sudden he's standing with his hand on the door, holding it closed, and Sam's face is twisted with surprise while Dean reaches up to touch his cheek, and then Dean says, "I don't mind, I don't," and Sam flinches away, steps back.

His face is white and horrified, and Dean's broken parts scrape against each other while Sam whispers, "I don't want it like that. I don't. Jesus Christ, who do you think I am, Dean?

These boys are just so broken and you just portray that perfectly without getting to that over-kill emo angst that unfortunately is such an easy line to cross in this fandom. Thank you for this rough, lovely fic (written three years ago).

Oh, lawd. That asswipe mark deserved what was coming to him. And I love well written wincest.

That was great! I love me some angsty wincesty goodness! I'm a little confused though, you made it sound like that the mark really did rape Dean and then later Sam said he ALMOST did. Still an excellent fic! *faves*

Aw.

At first, I was a little worried that Dean would just kinda use Sam to stay, but then I was very happy to read the end.

It was so sweet.

Aww...that was...a bit depressing but cute in a very broken and weird way! Poor Sam...I really like how you wrote Dean! You did a great job out of this! It was really really great!

I friggin LOVE your characterization of Dean, all the way through- it's perfect. I can totally see him slutting it up a little whenever he hustles, seriously. This was amazing. Love!

*grabby hands* want more...*sniff*

definatly good story, likes very much. thankyou for writing such wondeful things for people like me to read with my boyfriend.

and get ideas from *nudge* hehe

no, we are not infact brothers so this theme may not be successful...oh well, he always was dramatic, ROLEPLAY! hahahaha!

sorry, the point is...very nice writing. and yes, keep it up - xxJake

wow just that

great story

"...in some weird way they’re both broken, and they can’t be fixed but they can be broken together."- That is one the BEST ending lines I've read in ages and I'm doing English Lit at uni... Not a sunshine and roses story but a realistic one and the Wincest actually seems plausable.

*Faves*

My God that was beautiful.

Ok, so I am just getting a chance to catch up on your stories and this just blew my socks off. Loved it so much . Perfect voices. Perfectly written. Perfect and beautifully touching.

Right, off to read some more.