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Sara and gabriella
2007-09-15
ch 3,
abusehey i like this story you should keep going with this...

Sara
panthersrock08
2006-09-27
ch 3,
abusehey i liked the story i hope u finish it.
CSICubsFan
2006-06-05
ch 3,
abuseI hope you will continue very soon. I really like it so far :)
odeepblue
2006-06-05
ch 3,
abuselol, you are just mean, lol... leaving things like that! lol

loving it, and expecting your next ;)
Print Dust
2006-06-05
ch 3,
abuseThis story amuses me to no end! I really really love it and it always makes my day to see the next chapter posted.
Queen of Cliffies
2006-06-05
ch 3,
abuseLOVE IT! The part with Sofia made me chuckle, lol. KEEP IT UP!
MC New York
2006-06-05
ch 3,
abuseI'm loving this so far. I was wondering when someone was going to put up a story about Sara cheating on Hank with Grissom. I wanted to do it, but hey, I don't think it would be as good. Keep this up, and I'll definitely keep reviewing. Deal? Deal. Peace.

Peace out, one love,
MC New York
Cem214
2006-06-05
ch 3,
abuseFantastic! I love it!
stareagle
2006-06-03
ch 2,
abuseInteresting premise. And I am glad she dumped Hank! You quit just when it got interesting... I hope you don't wait too long to update. Please!
Thank you
Greggo's Gal
2006-06-01
ch 2,
abuseKeep writing!
odeepblue
2006-05-31
ch 2,
abusecool, please more !
GSRwriter52
2006-05-30
ch 2,
abuseOmg...you have to write more soon! AWESOME STORY.
CSIslave
2006-05-12
ch 1,
abuseoh, hey babe.. just got around to reading this... damn, your skills are building! *scrambles to catch up*

nice start! but why haven't you update it? I am SO SORRY about EOTB... my computer crashed and I lost what I had gotten done before! Now I'm bummed about it... I lost all my music videos too. Meh. I'll try to get some inspiration... I just have HUGE writers block!

Greggo's Gal
2006-03-26
ch 1,
abuseGreat story! You really do need to continue this. I want to know whats going on with Griss and Sara! lol!
Print Dust
2006-03-25
ch 1,
abuseI like, I like. Please update soon!
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