Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Help
Reviews For: Correction
book-manga-freak 2007-07-09 . chapter 1
nice way to portray him! i happen to believe Naruto CANNOT be as happy as he acts. no one who grows up scorned, rejected and hated will most likey ever turn out completely optimistic. it simply is not human nature...mer. bugs me to death how naruto is portrayed.

But i love how you write! well played out and concise. flows smoothly and inexorably towards its end. and i bet Naruto does want to prove them right sometimes...maybe wipe out the pesky idiots that accuse him of something he isn't...

did you get the pics i sent yet?
DeathBunny 2006-04-23 . chapter 1
Hey Lunar, It's Me! 1 of the few people who call Naruto a loser is *cough, cough sasuke* remeber that keychain I got ya, his head is so big, proving that he has a big ego! Anyway Naruto is getting stronger so he's no longer a weakling!
Good by the way!
Tenshi-Battosai 2006-03-26 . chapter 1
A very short, great fic! ^_^ Yeah, Naruto can have his angst times too T_T

Sayonara,

Tenshi-Battosai
LbcLostKid 2006-03-25 . chapter 1
Intresting story update soon
geospark525 2006-03-25 . chapter 1
very nicely written
wraithgirl 2006-03-25 . chapter 1
Well done! excellent writing job. hm...yeah, i think everybody feels that way sometimes.
Return to Top