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| erinsoccer17 2008-07-18 ch 1, | abuseHeheheheh, that was cute. His cape does bother me a lot. Though, I guess it does help with the whole thing of him looking like a vampire. XD |
2008-01-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseOkay, so there were spelling and grammatical mistakes and the flow jostled here and there, but this is an expressionistic romp through a youth's head that exposes her insights and fascinations rather lucidly. We've seen this sort of thing before (I've read a parody about Vincent needing to improve oral hygiene, which explained the cape), but it's all cheeky fun, and that's what counts. |
| Kikushi 2007-11-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was more like a YuffexCape thing. xD All the same, awesome. |
| Shouru-hime 2007-11-07 ch 1, | abuseOh, my gosh, that was hilarious! XD Great job! |
| ItsTeotwawki 2007-10-30 ch 1, | abuse...Well, there's Yuffie for ya. This was great- expecially the part about the eyes. That was really funny, and cute too. (the 'I was drunk when that thought popped out' part was the best.) |
| Paloma Helena Sangre 2007-07-16 ch 1, | abuseDid he ever wash them? Grossness. hahaha. that was the funniest line i have ever read in this story :D i've read this a while back and forgot to leave a review. now i want to do justice by leaving appropriate praise: go read this, people. you'd be surprised to discover that an inanimate thing can actually have a personality. yuffie has met her match in a cape. heh. thank you for this story. hope you write more. |
| Zeek72 2007-03-26 ch 1, | abuseGood fic. I admit that it's a funny ending. |
| a lovely idiot. 2006-12-16 ch 1, | abuse...xD That was awesome! I loved it, especially with all of Yuffie's thoughts on how to kill the cape...>.> And it was going so nicely until it poked her! Fave'd |
| PlumCrazy 2006-09-24 ch 1, | abuseThat was hilariously funny |
| LadyKisaragi 2006-08-25 ch 1, | abuseHehe, I found this a cute little one shot story. Yuffie has made friends with the cape. |
| Thunderstorm101 2006-08-19 ch 1, | abuseThe cape is possesed! 0.0 And...it doesn't like materia theives... |
| pride1289 2006-08-15 ch 1, | abuseshe burns the cape and im gunna kill her with a plastic spoon! the r very dangerous u know! |
| O.o 2006-08-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseAww, I luff the cape. It's like a super cool trademark of his and I own a blankie that's in the same condition. lol |
| foxygirlchan 2006-07-28 ch 1, | abuseIt is the evil cape of DOOM. >XD Great job! Very well written and in character! :3 I enjoyed reading this story! It was cute, short and to the point and very humourous to read! Yuffie is the ultimate Klepto ninja with a grudge against the cape! Poor Vincent has no clue why she glares at it. I'd be afraid if some ninja girl was glaring at my back/cape if I was him. Good job! This is a one-shot so I don't expect you to update, but it was swell! :3 |
| yllom21 2006-07-25 ch 1, | abuseCute Story, lovely job.I like your charecterization of both Yuffie and Vincent. |