awe. it was crazy good. squall seemed out of character to me but hey i really can't say anything seeing as i just started playing the game yestertday.

ADD! ADD!! That was too short a story!! You should add some more chapters. It still has some more juice to it. It couldn't have ended there!! What happened to the baby?? C'mon!! Continue it at least to the point that they're married.

good story but ending wasnt so good i mean shoulda added more

Aw! that was so sweet!

YAY! that was great!! ^_^ I can hear wedding bells already!! ^_^

Wow...this got to be the most interesting(and dangerous I may add)I ever read on how Squall proposed to Rinoa! That's sweet however...lol
Great job to the whole story, it will be nice though if you can add an epilogue about them...hm..maybe about their baby? LOL

Anyway, great job and good luck to your next story!

Oh bazama! That was sweet! HAHAH! Hm...what if Squall jumped or slipped when he was going down! xD!

Don't do that again!
lol

:p

navii

That was a great chapter!
You're awesome! Please update SOON!

Good chapter, looking forward to more

is that the last chapter or are there more? but it's ok. i guess. i like it. can't imagine him jumping off a building. when i was reading that part i was kinda laughning as well. nice job.

oh...no zell vs squall for rinoa.

I am so gonna have to rent the film! I wanna know what goes on!

Hi! I reread everything and I kinda like the new changes. Show more of their sides and emotion. Good chapter...I like it! Will Squall ever come to Rinoa and said what he really feels soon? Can't wait for the next chapter!

Seeya!

Interesting chapter

Hope u update it soon

Great chapter, very interesting story, looking forward to more