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asloonyasluna
2008-03-11 . chapter 3
hey, i dont know why u dont like ur own story... have always loved it... actually it was the start that got me hooked... loved the way u put her name and its meaning n all that stuff...
All da best with d writtin part, i know its kinda borin to write what u dont wanna... but giv it a shot... its gr8... really...

hope to hear more...
Triple V
2008-01-30 . chapter 3
I think this is a great story so far. Please update soon.
Sopor
2007-08-08 . chapter 3
I'm still getting a taste of LunaxHarry, so I don't have too much of an opinion for the story. So far, Luna does seem a bit OOC, like you mentioned, but not too much. :3 DracoxGinny is one of my favorites; I was glad to see a hint of that in it.

It's going in a nice direction, please continue soon.
Deviate Fish
2007-08-02 . chapter 3
poor luna. somehow she is not dosing off and weird.
me
2007-07-18 . chapter 3
cute i'd like to read more.
petites sorcieres
2007-07-17 . chapter 3
This is really funny! God, please someone stop her from sending this ! She CAN T really go with Smith! She can't ASK him ! Well...It doesn't matter to me if HE asks her (it will get Harry jealous) but if she ask him, he will just play with her.
I like 1) Harry and Luna in the tub lol!
2) Smith's commentary about luna lol ^-^

Continue please! I love it!
Sharper Lee
2007-07-11 . chapter 3
MUST...HAVE...MORE...BRAINS...ER...STORY...
Sharper Lee
2007-07-11 . chapter 2
Hey, this is pretty good! Luna isn't exactly as she's usually brought across in the books, but she does occasionally say blunt stuff in your stories, so you're doing alright.
Oh, and by the way the correct spelling for 'Rictasempra' is Rectusempra I think. :)
Ok I'll read the next chapter now :)
crazylittlewitch
2007-07-09 . chapter 3
Hello thankyou for updating this story! please finish it'! um just a small question!! WHAT ABOUT HARRY AND LUNE, HMM? STUFF ZACHARIAS SMITH! um sorry just had to get that out of my system :-) crazylittlewitch
APRIL26
2007-07-07 . chapter 3
this was an interesting chapter. update soon.
vivilp182
2007-07-07 . chapter 3
Hey good chapter! I guess I'll have to read the other chapters, cuase I can't remember what happened hehe... Please don't make Harry go with Ginny. I'm curious about Luna's mom and her connection to Lucius. Update soon please!
vivilp182
2006-12-21 . chapter 2
Great chapter! Ow I can't wait for Harry to invite Luna! Doesn't Ginny like Harry anymore? Please update very soon!
vivilp182
2006-12-21 . chapter 1
Hey great first chapter! Well Luna is a bit ooc, but I'm enjoying her so far. And how isn't Voldemort around anymore? Did Harry kill him in sixth year?
Flower248
2006-11-09 . chapter 2
Please update, i like your story, thats probably because I like Luna alot and not many people write about her.
Manatheron
2006-11-06 . chapter 2
... Wow!

Thats one hell of a setup, I can't wait to see where you go with it!
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