 ladybugg 2007-12-03 . chapter 2Hehehe I liked this chapter. Especally with everyone bickering and what not. Now I kinda see why Pan wishes that she had a normal family. They are just too wired up. I also loved that line your little food protection program. That was classic. Keep up the great work. Now onward to more exciting chapters. Laters/ |
 ladybugg 2007-12-02 . chapter 1Hm another one that I have to play catch up with. Still it's pretty good beginning, and I can't wait to see what happens next. It's also good to see that I'm not the only one who thinks butterflies are evil lil creatures. ICK. Great job. Keep up the awesome work, |
 Blue Rubin 2007-05-12 . chapter 7ah, i loved it! It´s hillarious, and i liked the passion part as well,...did i ever. Wonder what ya gonna do next? anyway..keep up the good work |
 Moondalian 2007-05-08 . chapter 7°End of the world finally comes and Earth explodes° Ghe, guess life didn't go on after all huh? (A) Don't worry, at least the afterlife will go on!
Okay, now onto the actual story. Amy is evil! She keeps interfearing with all the kisses! For a five-year old, we sure did make her way too evil you know... yeah, gotta love that girl ^^
And yes! I already know what's gonna happen! MUAHAHAAHAHAHAH! °points and laughs at all the clueless reviewers before Nalurah hits her on the head so she'll stop° Geez! Lurah-chan, you're being mean °sulks° then again, you always are so yeah, let's just ignore that for now. °coughs°
Okay, I'm onto the rest of my way-too-many updates to read. I'll cya on MSN later AND I'll cya tomorrow at my place! MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Be prepared to be tortured! °runs off to make evil plans°
Moony |
 Mystic Dodo 2007-05-06 . chapter 7Revenge is sweet!! or was it Vengance...
Something like that. Sweet fluffy kawaii cute sweet (i've said that) chapter! When i saw thetitle i was like... "movie star?"
Anyways, great chap and update when you can. |
 Moondalian 2006-11-28 . chapter 6°hugs dodo° 'course I'm not mad at you twin! It's that ** of an authoress that I want to kill °sticks tongue out at Nalurah° Now then, come along sowe can start planning torure ways for Nalurah °both walk off°
Mooney ^^
P.S.: If I'm no longer Sub-Authoress, I refuse to review from now on! |
 Blue Rubin 2006-11-28 . chapter 4up till now this has been the utmost crazy lunatic bizzare, funny hilarious story i´ve ever read. I´ll finish it when i have time next time( i hate it when i don´t have enough time for reading..school...go figure) anyway, keep writing, it´s quite enjoyable |
 Innocent Slayer 2006-11-28 . chapter 6DEAD DEAD DEAD DEAD DEAD DEAD DEAD! IM NOT A BLOODY BARBIE PRINCESS! The character Leila should be tortured much more! MUCH MUCH MORE!
*glares* *ignores Eline* |
 Innocent Slayer 2006-11-18 . chapter 5Great Fic! I love the randomness... *whispers to Nalurah and Izzy* Try to write in Leila losing in a fight against Tea for me! *smirks at leila* ITS BRILLIANT!
Britt |
 Innocent Slayer 2006-11-18 . chapter 3THAT's MY PHRASE REALLY! STUPID I CANT CLAIM ANYTHING RULE! Dont worry Nalurah i dont mind you using it, but *glares to Leila* I AM THE TRUE OWNER! LIKE IM THE TRUE RULER OF THE MULTIVERSE! MUHAHAHAHAHHA!Good Fic btw!
Well done Nalurah and Karai! Did i forget someone (A)I didnt think so either! I hope the character Leila dies, or is tortures OR i reckon she should lose in a fight against Tea (A) Would be a great comedy (A) ^^
Britt |
 Moondalian 2006-11-07 . chapter 5WHO THE HELL IS THAT IZZY?!?!?!?!? °sulks° nobody ever tells me anything nowadays. Though I am glad to see that Hirou's already slightly reverting t5o the Hirou we know °smirks° ya gotta love the perverted version.
Anyway, I'm off to investigate the mystery of the stage... and now the people watching, lights, and probably the camera's that are bound to come in at one point or another. Cya later!
Moony |
 Mystic Dodo 2006-11-07 . chapter 5Err...did i review chapter 4?!?! *confused look* I dunno if i did or didn't...
Well, I agree that Leila is evil and all but i thought YOU were supoosed to be the evilliest because your my "evil dutch friend?" and why wasn't you in the chapter?! Am i missing something here? *is now very confused* have you been in the story before, apart from the ANs? WHY CAN'T I REMEMBER?!?! either i've mysterioulsy lost my memories of half of the fic or i'm losing my mind...
Well, great funny chapter and update it soon because it made me laugh! and you know how hard that is! *wink* |
 Moondalian 2006-10-30 . chapter 4NO! HOW DAREE YOU THREATEN TO PAIR MY GO-CHAN WITH THAT...THAT... THING! You're so DEAD when I see you at school in about an hour! *goes off to plot your demise*
Moony
P.S.: Nice chap ^^ |
 Mystic Dodo 2006-10-28 . chapter 3Hehe i loved the story but i ADORED the Author's Notes!! And don't worry Lien, Dodo loves ya! And make sure you give Leila her pills because she was scaring me the other days! *hids* And if it annoys Britt, say the line as much as possble! I want payback for her trapping me and managing to give me a makeover! *glares*
Well, update when you can because it's funny! I wonder what Pan is gonna do to Gohan?? *thinks* OUCH MY HEAD HURTS! Nah,i'm gonna wait for the next chapter... Thinking is BAD for Dodo... so update when you can! |
 Jaedeonsierra 2006-10-28 . chapter 3 Ok back thankfully only three chaps behind.
Loving Getas Santa phobia; bit extreme perhaps but then again hes and extreme man...so all and all it works.
Suprized me with Pikachu last chapter and Snorlaxpika well nice to see the brain cells work in the opposite way...good use of humor there.
Structurely your solid and no really bad spelling errors or gramar usages ...so work on , write on and have fun with it. (btw decided not to pick on you for the chapter two error in "scarcasme"...lol know from experience that little middle finger has mind of its own sometimes and well a writer must not pull a Van Goh (omg !! finally forgot how to spell that..lol love it know its wrong but cant figure out..why couldnt he be Van Brown or something ...lol self picking this is bad)and chop off fingers...would be hard to type then)
til later. |