You really really need to update. I love how you added so many TT characters by the way.

Not to put too much pressure on you but... please right the rest as soon as possible!

hm. good so far. but not great. it'll be interesting to read the next chapter.

It's DENNY!(don't ask, it's a compliment) It's a cool spin on it.

Dude - never update much?
Lolz >.< Nah - i'm kidding! Fantastic frist four chapters - love this story!
But please put more KF/Jinx in the next few chapters! I absolutely LOVE that pairing!
And Oh - what was that bit with Kori and Richard?!
Wahh! Can't wait for more!

I love this story

Why must you critcize your own writing? It most definately does NOT "suck," as you so elegantly put it.

Anyway, got anything more planned for this story, or is still on hold?

Hehehe.

-- Sage

heh continue :) OR ELSE!

LOL! Love it!! Jeez I love BB's character! Haha I love how you wrote Jen, so in character. Well keep up the fantabulous work. Very well written.

--VeelaChic

Loved the new chapter, keep it up.

AH! No! It's...so...short!! Ep! I love it, it's killer!I read it because you said you were working on it instead of MDRAJ. And I was so sad that MDRAJ was on Hiatus that I began to read this one, but it's so short! T-T You're killing me with this, all this incomplete-ness, really you are. I think I might faint from the devastation of all this. But I really like this story. I've become hooked on the BBRae Pairing... O.O! I'm a shipper! Ack, I don't like shippers... All well, I guess I have to now. So, now that I'm a shipper, and I'm becoming used to the idea of shippers not being that bad --dodges shreiking fangirl-- AH! Changed my mind! I'm afraid of extreme shippers! that's what I've decided. Oh, and shreiking people...shreiking is really terrifying to me... and, moving on. i'm skipping around and changing the subject, I'm bad for that. I start talking about another thing almost halfway through a sentence. I start telling a story, like something I did on the weekend, I get halfway through it and then I gasp and say "OH!" and start telling them somehting completely different and I usually forget what I was talking about in the first place. Luckily for me, I have this typed, so I can just scroll up and read what I was saying before. Which was that I loved your story! Also, I noticed, I think it was chapter two, you were skipping around between calling her Jinx and Jen. I get confused sometimesn between if Jen and Jinx are the same person. Are they... I think they are. Hm. Well, k, I'm a bit tired so I'm gonna stop typing now and go to bed because I'm being yelled at anyways. Bye byes.

--Autum

Good!

shweet. i just found this story and I FLIPPIN' LOVE IT! can't wait till you update.

forever reading,
~*The Mythical Raven*~

that was totally wicked awesome!!1 please update soon!! this is just so good!
:):D:>~ CSG ~:>:D:)