i thought that was great and yes i did get that Wicked thing at the end. Im an absoloute wicked Wicked fan! I love Wicked it is the single greatest musical out there!

Really awesome story, and extremely well written. Initially, while reading, I somehow assumed that it was Draco, but afterwards it seemed to make more sense if it was Snape- because of Lily and James. Well Done!

I think he's Draco Malfoy.

Hey! I really enjoyed this story, especially the essay. I agree with most of your ideas and find myself identified with your way of thinking. I loved the way this was paced, although I'm disappointed it ended so fast. You left me with the curtain the wind, but I enjoyed it. I like to think the essay's writer is Draco Malfoy, but that's just my over obsession with the pairing and the fact that it would make a great comparision to Jane Austen's book (lol, Draco as Darcy! Or would it be Dracy? XD). Liked it a lot, you're a great writer! Keep it up ^_^

extrememly well-written
awesome!

~Cham

it was great! i loved it! was the guy draco malfoy? at first i had thought it was snape but i guess not. it mentioned potter, so it could have been either one of them. and the girl... was it hermione? i don't kno why i think that, it's just, i think thats just who it is. i really don't kno. I llike 'the knights of the pentagonal table'.

Shameless Self-Promotion, eh?

Honestly, I wasn't expecting Snape and Lily, though even if it isn't the pairing, there is a distinct possibility since you've left most characters anonymous. But, I was leaning more towards Draco/Hermione. I thought it was obvious because of the 'thick hair'. But, then again, Lily could've had thick hair.

Jesus, I was spellbound by the influence, and blood you put into this story (though that sounds awfully morbid.) Draco and Snape are more alike than either of them know, it's scary.
Gah, although, I've always imagined S.O.S. literate. For good reason. (Glomps) Such a good story, Bismallah! Yeah, this review is crap. Looking forward to your next brilliant piece.

That is really beautiful, and very true. (It sounds like Snape and Lily to me, but I could be wrong.) I think writing it as an essay got the point across really well. And I've always thought the same thing about the houses, and I was really surprised and pleased that someone else noted that the system didn't allow for personal growth.

No self-respecting die-hard fan of Wicked would overlook that line.

It's difficult to build up a storyline around an essay, but I think you did it as well as you could. It worked for me, at least. Excellent piece.

I think it's a really interesting piece of writing. I wonder if J.K. Rowling ever thought about that when she wrote her stories. I don't think it needs anything added to it, let the readers wonder. I definately think the writer is Snape and that the girl is Lily, all the clues are there.

No thanks. No shameless self-promotion for you. But it's a nice story. Well-written, and a good viewpoint. Better left open really. Though I imagine you had a certain someone in mind.

Bravo.

well, I think it's Severus but that's just me. I first was leaning towards the current generation but after reading the very good, introspective writing Snape made the most sense. This is very good - I felt like the letter/essay/narrative was just a little too long, but I loved the points made (especially looking at the badges first - much like Nazi reign). I also don't think the character is "wicked through and through" though all of wizardtown may think differently after book 6. Yes, I got the Wicked reference, btw:) I really liked the ending as well. Great work.

bravo. i get the feeking that it was Drac that ahd writeen the essay and i want to say that it was a ery well written piece of work.for once i wish i could find a piece of fic were HG and DM actually got together but so far i haven't. i look forward to future fics from you.

ok i had to review first, but i am gonna go see who i think this elusive 'S.O.S' is now, but as said i first had to say mad story mate, loved it, and i liked the points you made about unity *sniff sniff* its so very importante, =D rock on
*goes to read this other thingy now

it was a lovely story (essay?), really.

and i agree with you completely on how the houses create barriers.

and of course i think the writer is malfoy, but what do i know?

i think it would make a wonderful multi-chaptered piece, but that's just me, and you may not want to. but if you did, i would definitely read it.

Wonderful story, I loved it. =)

Well-written, pirate, as usual. =P But hey, it's a good thing. :)

This is a much better alternative than reading those romance fanfics that I read all the time. It's hard to get a real good fanfic around here. O.o

I hope you could write more of these! Hehehe. XD

- chaser

P.S:

This fanfic's going to be in my favorites. :D