More Plz love this story n hate kikyo! Inu&kag4ever!

Suggestions: sesshamaru rapes kagome but inuyasha kill sesshamaru before

He lays his hands on her. Kikyo hatred causes her to die.

Sesshamaru use tessaga to heal himself n he finds Rin , mate, marry

N have kids n says sorry to kagome for almost raping her n tells

Inuyasha he wants to fix their relationship.

I am looking for ppl to read my storys and let me know if they crappy

N watnot. Any1 intrested plz email me . Ty!

hello i really enjoyed this fic it was very detailed and interesting. Also i just want to let you know i noticed you used dived a few times in the writing and i just thought you should know the correct tense is dove. but other than that really good!

Wow.. Simply, wow.

Your words, your details.. The passion you put into your stories. Simply amazing- I envy you so much for being able to put so much detail into it.

more

Oh i do Wish you would continue this Story. It was the First Fan fiction i ever read and it is amazing. i was hoping by now you have finished it but to see a discontinued makes me horribly sad. Please reconsider

I beg of you, please continue. I've been following this story from the beginning, hoping you'd come back one day...

Please, please ,please, more! It's my fault to not check correctly if this story was finished before I got started reading it, but now, I'm hooked, want - need - more Sesh/Kag and this story sounds like it would be amazing! please please, say there's more somewhere else so that I can find out what happens next, please!

Great job, and if it were complete, it would undoubtedly be awesome!

Please more!

Hope you're still writing!

'.'

Oh, Kagome and Sessho :) I must disagree with him; this picture is somehow perfect ;P Of course, I hope Inuyasha can tell her how he really feels (damn his nose for playing tricks on him), but I also hope you'll finish this story so that we can see more of KS :) I want to see if he'll break her, or if she'll break him ;P

More please!

I should add this to my favorites since it is one of the FIRST Sessh-Kagome fanfics I've ever read.

i loved all of it but where is the rest of the story huh huh? i need to know what happens. come on.

beautiful story, i really wish u'd update and keep going with this it's too great NOT to finish! so yeah, please update and email me also if u do, thanx

hi,

good story have u tried 2 write more?

also i have a ? for u

how many Ranma 1/2 stories have u read

me 2

good

oh wow...beautiful story, i love it so far. especially the Sesshomaru/Kagome scenes (yes, i'm a sap for those) anyways, keep up the amazing work!

-Sei

You have a wonderful talent, I'll give you that! I can tell you like to be descriptive about Kagome's emotions. I only had time this time to read 3/4 of the first chapter, but I think I know what your style is. Your descriptions are beautiful flowers, and if you were just doing a narrative about Kagome's feelings in general, this would be perfect. You have a lot of flowery things going on here- while they are beautiful and poetic, they sometimes obscure the vision of the plot. I think that you concentrate a little too much on trying to make it sound pretty that you lose the vision of what's going on in the story. You also tend to be a little repetitive. Some things, I know, in order to sound graceful, you seem to rephrase in different ways, but you are still saying the same things- and as I've said before, that obscures the story-line. Sorry about my long entry- I hope I'm not boring you or that you think I'm "attacking" your writing style, because I'm not. Your style is awesome- graceful, poetic, and with a little more coordination you can write magnificent peices. You have a great potential as a writer and I hope that you keep working towards that goal. I hope to read more fics by you- or original stories- you definitely have the talent to do that. I can't wait to read the rest of what you've written! But now it is 1:40AM for me and I am crazy for staying up this late. O.o; Please keep writing! I have added you to the list of GOOD writers in this website. Up until now I have begun to lose hope in this generation of fanfiction... hoping you will change this opinion around! Well- i'm off to sleep- I've got Tae Kwon Do in the morning... if I don't sleep through it, that is! - Hope this rewiew wasn't too-too long...! Heh, heh!-

Now is the time for my oh-so-famous-signature:

Mel-chan :-)