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Taranea 2008-04-27 . chapter 12
Wow. After the 'Eye of Doom', i found myself reading through all of Mercury Inferno, Worthless, Captivity (STILL feeling so bad for Shadow...), and In Pursuit of Revenge again. It's really cool - now that I've grown to like Mecha and the chao a lot more, these fics are even cooler than I remembered. :)
Thank you so much for all your time and effort put into writing these. I especially like Mecha's various run-ins with religion and their different outcomes, as well as Shadow's road to recovery (and the times Mekion is in control make me cringe...).

Now I was just wondering: Do you have the story where Robo Knux/Metal Sonic defy Robotnik and leave his service? I would very much like to read it, but after scanning your summaries I couldn't find anything that seemed to go in this direction...is there one? Thanks!

Taranea^^
sonamy4eva22 2008-01-18 . chapter 12
Um...ok...but you shouldn't write stories that say SONIC AND AMY on the top if they are not about them. I think that Sonic was acting like a jerk by telling Amy to grow up. I felt like slapping his face. Well, good story (sigh) Keep it up! =)
Lord of Ki 2007-03-12 . chapter 1
Man this story is good! You just keep making them better and better!
tenamanda1988 2007-02-25 . chapter 12
Nice fics! And I say fics as I've barely finished reading your entire Sonic AU XD; took quite a few nights I can tell you. Its so impressive to find such a well thought out and written AU such as this ^^ Its been a pleasure reading each fic, particuarly for the relationships between the characters. Mecha and Shadow have to be my faves so far though XD I found their entire story fascinating and can't wait to read what happens to them next. I'm very much looking forward to your next fic! You're one dedicated author! :D
writergurlLW 2007-02-19 . chapter 1
You are an excellent writer I must say so myself. Have you tried to get published before? If not, you should. It's really hard to find a story on this site that attaches me in the first chapter, yet you have already got me hooked. This is something different. As an aspiring writer I hope to earn the reputation you have some day.

~WriterGurlLW
sour skittles 12 2007-01-30 . chapter 2
these are really good, but if it wouldn't be too much to ask, could you either separate the articles to make more chapters or cut down the size of the chapters? i have issues keeping track of where i am, and i think some other people may too. other than that it rocks!
Drake Dragonsoul 2006-05-27 . chapter 12
I love your stories! Your characterization is very good. I'm hoping that the next story will be a Shadow the Hedgehog adapt.

I still like the stories even though I'm reading them all out of order!
dead deleted closed 2006-04-24 . chapter 12
Well! I seem to have found my near-antithesis. Overly nice, confident *and* a good writer. I could go on.
Anywho, I've been tracking your fics for quite a while now--I never expected you to turn up here, though. For some reason I had it stuck in my head that you had something against this site (for painfully obvious reasons).
I'll put you on author alert :D

~I have seen the fnords!~
ERZLO
Shy heartfox 2006-04-17 . chapter 1
You going to do a sequel? I want to see it! Loved this.
Chiwizard 2006-04-15 . chapter 12
Sorry this review took so long to post. Just wanted to say this fic was good beginning to end. Drasyre's punishment seems wonderfully dragonish, and the Spark-Amy dynamic will be interesting to contemplate...so will the Spike-Serena pairing, assuming Sonic and Spark don't sic Dras on Spike.

That last bit with the 'truth about Mekion' was wonderfully intriguing too. I have some possibilities on what Mecha meant, and none of bode well...yeesh, I sound like I'm you're editor or something don't I?

Overall, great fic, and can't (but will) wait for the next one. Ciao!
frostychan12 2006-04-11 . chapter 12
YAYNESS. That was so awesome...^_^ *clapclapclapclapclapclapclap*
Antithesis 2006-04-11 . chapter 12
That was quick...

While the ending seems a little too cut-and-dry, I'm also aware of how much healing, physical or spiritual, can help a relationship. So in that light, I guess Spark and Drasyre's friendship makes sense.

Spark and Amy? Eh, I guess it could be worse. Amy's got a lot of growing up to do, though. I suppose Spark'll help her with that.

And it also seems like Sonic's got a lot of apologizing to do. That kid needs to slow down, y'know? And on the same note, Serena does need to follow Spark's advice with Spike (too many S names!). Given Sonic's performance with the sword, I'd hate to see what a shotgun wedding would look like in that family. :D

I'm assuming this is a setup for something yet to come... as usual, I can't wait.
hawsk soul 2006-04-11 . chapter 12
very sweet, very thrilling, very very nice
Rock Raider 2006-04-10 . chapter 12
Nice. I think Spark's punishment was sorta dumb & undeserved, but I guess that's how dragon's are. Also, nice job with the AmyxSpark. You tied up all the loose ends except for 1. Nox is still hurt, & I HOPE he recovers from what Shadow has done to him. Well, guess I'll be seein' ya.
Chiwizard 2006-04-10 . chapter 10
Oh dear. That certainly can't be good. Everything is going to be going crazy next chapter isn't it? Especially since I doubt you brought in that fragment of the Eighth just to power Spark's sparks...

...I just had a painful thought. Amy's not going to think DRASYRE is good boyfriend material, is she? That is just not right on so many levels.
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