Aw this is such a sad story ;( Keep writing though!

I love your style! The easy-reading poems and the switching of perspectives are really great. And the /emotion/ that's conveyed in each chapter is wonderful. I can't wait until the next chapter!

Cool beans,lots of emotion in them all,and wow at it being first published at March 2006, and your still updating a year later.

And you FINALLY update! At last! Yet another awesome piece of work. I love your style, because it's like your writing a mix of a story and a poem, instead of writing poems like Shakespeare. -shudders- Now I absolutely can't wait until the next poem. Just don't make me wait so long! XD

Ooh, conflict! I can't wait read more. :D

Beautifully sad chapter :/

Really great job on this, I can't wait to see where you go with it.

I love your poems! They are so good! You should defently work more on those!

I don't care much for poetry, but I really like this story-ish poem!

Oh my gosh...
I LOVE THIS STORY!
Keep up the great work!

I really like your story because I LOVE Avatar. The poems are also really good and beautiful. You're a great writer. I really want to hear more so please write the next poem. Thanks!

Whops! I mean, it was the most moving thing I've ever read, not written. You wrote it, I did not. Great story, and update please!

Oops, I apologize, I just realized that I gave that reveiw without being logged in.

Wow,Ataraia, what a great poem!!
I just became a member here and read "Brightest in the Dark" for the first time.
I saw that it has been quite awhile since you updated; please update soon.

*Sob* OMG that was the most moving thing I've ever written! This is Aquabreeze87, a fellow member of cloud nine, and OMG! UPDATE!

Update soon! I want Katara and Aang to make up so bad!