A fantastic story. You are, indeed, a great writer oh master Koyla. Whoever thinks you are pushy and self-centered is not worthy of being part of the Genii. I hope you accept my compliments and write more despite the show's cancellation.

- PJ

Frickin' hilarious and the epilogue is just GENIUS! The whole trip to the planet was just that - a trip! Wormhole X-treme on acid! I'm not surprised Weir thinks it was a mass hallucination. I thought it might be someone's feverish dream, actually. And Nonor was a brilliant OFC, completely clueless!

Hahaha! It was nice to see that Nonor didn't end up being a mary-sue, beautiful, great warrior, noble, blah blah blah--she was a pretty hilarious character.

And to think that all they had to do was strike up a conversation with the Molepeople to get a nice, steady, supply of that salve... great ending!

I approve of your death by color story. And your author notes confuse me, scare me, amuse me and cause me to develop snack cravings. I enjoy.

I love the not so subtle Monty Python reference.

Wow. These people really really really need to brush up on their mythology. 'Friendly' does not compute with 'Things with horns.' I'm glad that you decided to stick with the good ol myths. And poor McKay. It must suck to always be right.

Great story! I especially love the epilogue. That is so ironic.

This story... Was scary in it's superiority. I'm scared of your talent. I love you. Write more? Pweeze?

Sugar and love! Now write some more stories! Pwease, pwetty pwease!

Darn I love you stories!

Good god, she finally found herself a brain!

argh...death by the fuzzy rabbit is too good for her!

lol...not funny but I can just picture that last scene...Poor Carson.

Damn, I hate that Nonor! I read and I find myself getting as angry as Mckay.

Pretty good with words I see.

I feel really sorry for Rodney!
That nasty woman has everyone wrapped around her little finger...
She needs a good kicking

bizarre fun.