I loved this

Oh so this is what's been on your SN for the time been. You must continue :)
-Eyes

Sanity, I slowly die

How 'bout that? I like the style, though that second why at the end seems ... amiss.

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outcast-angel.

aw.. i really like this poem!

That is a really awesome poem! It's dark but pretty in the same way. For some reason it reminded me of Evanescence. You know how their songs are always sad and stuff. The ending is sad but keep up the great job! oh and there's this thing called Teen Ink at: and they publish work by teens. it's purely teens. and maybe they'll publish your stuff. and if they do they send you a copy too. cool? well i think you should go for it. oh yes and there's a thing and they would definetely publish your poems cuz yur better than me and they published mines. you don't gt a copy though unless you buy the whole book though. : ( anyways this is probably the longest review so ill stop lol

u idiot come up with titles for poems... T.T' if u need a title write the poem then read over to find what it all adds up to... like death or depression... sigh... i'm guessing ur too lazy...
-01xDevilshBABYY

Whoa. That gave me the chills. You had a good ryming scheme I think, and I liked how you did it two lines at a time.

Um, wow, suicidal Botan... Like, I can see it... but I can't... know what I mean? It's really hard to make depressing poetry rhyme. I dunno if that was the smartest thing, but hey, it wasn't too bad. I'll give you points on the Angst-o-Meter, though!

*~*~*crazykitsune17*~*~*

No offense, but why do a lot of people have a depressed Botan who cuts/commits suicide? It just doesn't add up.