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Reviews For: Warm Up

Rycr
2006-07-23
ch 1,
abuseVery good! You have a different style of writing than lyokolady's, but it works well with the plot of the story. SAA is a great series, and that oneshot fit in perfectly! Now I have to go read the Retelling series, but I'm not sure I have the time to dedicate to a story that is longer than 250 words! I suppose I'll just have to get some spare time.
Sunfrost
2006-05-30
ch 1, anon.
abuseCool! Although I thought there was a glitch and Chelsea's clothes were supposed to be red...ANYWAY, great story!
Franken-XANA
2006-05-04
ch 1,
abuseI like Chelsea from SAA, and I've thought Jin was a hoot when I first started to read about him! I can't wait for the next chapter of 'Retelling'; it sounds like it's going to be HOT!

My rating for 'Warm Up' a 9.9 out of 10!

Your friend Isaac, now known as 'Franken-XANA'

PS -
If you have any spare time, check out my fanfic, Code Genesis; Chapter Four coming up tonight!
StrugglingArtist
2006-04-22
ch 1,
abuseCool crossover. I really like your style of writing. :-]
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Sparkles of Youthfulness
2006-04-11
ch 1,
abuseAwesome story! I'm a big fan of SAA. And while I haven't read yours, I'll check it out. Again, great ob!
Kerae
2006-04-09
ch 1,
abuseHey this is really good! I'm a fan of lyokolady's SAA series too. Read all the original books and although I don't think she should have just out right deleted it, I understand why she did.

Anywayz, I haven't yet read your Retelling but just by the # of words you put and the reviews that I read, I can tell you put a huge effort into it. Can't wait to read it ^_^
Ikari Keiji-kun
2006-03-27
ch 1,
abuseNice spin off there, I enjoyed reading it :)

Now hurry up with the next chapter of Retelling, at least I know why it's taking so long j/k =p
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