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| LittleLinor 2007-06-29 ch 5, | abuse*gasp* Tammy fan as well as FE fan? Anyways I like this fic. it's really too bad that I haven't played this particular FE and only know the supports, but I still like it/ *puts on alert* |
| RedGems 2007-06-17 ch 5, | abuseYour Saleh and Gerik drabbles are always so nice and interesting. Great work. |
| AndreannaMaree 2006-07-10 ch 1, | abusehey, is this a book about a girl who becomes the Firelord, or whatever it was? If not, I'm crazy...but the names sound vaguely familiar...I read that book two years ago, so I should reread it anyway, even if it's not what your fanfic's about lol the writing's really good, but I suppose i should know more about the subject lol |
| Nariko.Hoshi 2006-07-05 ch 3, | abuse(Yes!! Gerik AND Saleh!! Yay!!) FE:SS dosn't get enoguh love. And not enough good writers, either. So thanks for writing this! I love that there is a mood in the whole story, it really makes it nicer to read. Your style of writing is good, and different. Original, really. Continue! ~Hoshi |
| Random Generic Hero 2006-06-02 ch 3, anon. | abuseLike whoa, actually finding something Gerik and Saleh centered is awesome. I'm glad someone's finally writing it. I hope you write more because I'm loving this story~ ^_^ |
| Pureauthor 2006-04-16 ch 3, | abuseThe entire story feels... peaceful. I like that. The Saleh/Gerik interaction seems pretty in character, with Gerik being a lot more forgiving than Saleh, who's sombre. It does seem a wee bit too introspective for someone like Gerik, though. He strikes me more as the kind to accept things at face value. Well, that tiny nitpick aside, this is a solid story, with good grammar and characterization. Keep on writing. |
| Legendary Armor 2006-04-14 ch 3, | abuseHmm. Subtle as usual, but that's what makes it brilliant. Great job as always; can't wait to see what you post next. |
| Leland Lancaster 2006-04-11 ch 3, anon. | abuseAww. I love Saleh so much. Your characterization of him is done well, too. He needs a nice Gerik-y hug. :D |
| leradny 2006-04-01 ch 2, | abuseOoh, SalehGerik. - "...You can say it if you want to." Saleh opens his eyes. He looks down at the mercenary, with a thoughtful sort of look that leaves Gerik in the dark as to what he might be feeling. But he doesn't say anything. - First I read chapter one, then chapter two, then I didn't get it so I started reading chapter one again and FINALLY I get it. I think Saleh needs a hug. And by the by--this was not too vague at all. Your writing has improved from that carnival piece :D. |
| Legendary Armor 2006-03-31 ch 2, | abuseOh, I adore these two. I'm glad someone else does as well! Your writing is fantastic, and I suppose your vagueness adds a sense of mood to it, in answer to your question. Great job, and I can't wait to see the next chapter. |
| Leland Lancaster 2006-03-28 ch 2, | abuseI like the vague-ness of this chapter. It's peaceful and calm and very quiet. Which fits the scenario, well. |
| Leland Lancaster 2006-03-28 ch 1, | abuseWow. I totally adore Gerik and Saleh's friendship/relationship/whatever and I think that it's great that you've written about the two of them. This is a such a sweetly sad chapter. Awesome writing. |
| Ormiss 2006-03-27 ch 2, | abuseFirstly, I've never seen the Saleh/Gerik supports, because, let's face it, I'm the kind of guy who uses his supports for chicks with swords. As a collection, the two bits are serene, and thoughtful. The first bit is somewhat overly dramatic, I think. It feels abrupt; like thunder from clear skies. On the other hand, it's well written. The last three paragraphs are excellent. The second bit is the sort of thing I like not because it provokes any emotion in me, or gives me anything... but because it radiates a sensation of serenity. It does seem vague, because there's no true -ending-. It ends with a beginning, like a strange collage of clips in some anime with a proclivity for random thought. Too much subtlety? Nah. Too much reflection? Naw. Gerik seems reflective, but in an unspecified way; he's no sage, after all. |
| Amethyst Bubble 2006-03-27 ch 2, | abuseI... I think I love you for writing this. The interaction between these two gets absolutely no love from the fandom and I've been craving some fiction for them so. So THANK YOU for writing this! I shower you with virtual cookies. What I liked best was the sense of calm and quiet that seemed to radiate from this fic. It's very nice~. -Ammy |