that was great!! really great!!


HawkAngel

that is one very cute piece... i was wondering where you gonna take us when you have Georgiana exclaimed Mozart... but ooh my the sudden turn... love Mary transformation.. she is not so dull afterall...can I implore u to write more JAFF?

This was adorable! You captured P&P 2005's characters well with their conversation, and I thought the moment Lizzy & Darcy shared while with their sisters was very sweet.

HA! ADORABLE.

I LOVED it, especially the banter in the beginning- it was SO like them :) Hurrah, hurrah!

This is fantastic! I've always liked the idea of fics looking into their married life and this just hits the nail on the head perfectly.

Cute.

Very good writing!
Engaging, I could see the characters perfectly, and the dialogue sounded exactly what they each would have said.
I like the fact Darcy and lizzie are very roamnticlaly intimate.
They are in love aren't they? Duh!
Excellent work!

This is a wonderful chapter. I absolutely loved how well you did the speech of the characters. It definently fit more with the book as a continuation. Great job!
~picchic

Ever tried to throw a piece of ribbon? *raises an eyebrow* They're not very...aerodynamic... it just doesn't work...

Other than that I loved the fic! The banter and fluff was very tasteful and well-written.

~*Erkith*~

I'm not usually a fan of the present tense, but this was a lovely one-shot, especially Lizzy's unwitting seduction of Mr. Darcy through recollection. The chemistry between husband and wife is a powerful thing, and you displayed it in a very subtle but effective way here. Very nice.