i loved it, short but sweet. i love everything about escaflowne, even the fanfics. yours are great.

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This is a great story. I wish you would coninue with it, even if you didn't plan to. You have to continue 'cause I say so! So there! lol Anyway, please continue it would be so nice of you to continue...Unless you don't like being called nice... If that's the case it would be very mean of you to continue... Unless you don't like being called mean either... Well you get the idea. Continue!

pretty good but i t could have been happier. like her showing up and kicking all of those princesses butts! very happy though. keep going!

I loved it. So sappy.

That was touching, really touching. I thought it was great!

I LOVE THE FICCIE MAN! no cry anymore! hey, you just added a word to my Jap dictio! Hmm, yeah. I ALMOST forgot to greet Van on his birthday. But then, I've got this silly diary and i call it Van... i know. Nerdy. But anyways, Keep you up! It's just as well Hitomi's rose was left- I know you were there at his party. (DUH!) WRITE MORE! uhh... now for CC (constructive criticism)- NOTHING! I mean the ficcie was well wrote. Kinda cheesy the part wherein Van said the thank you stuff... you know. Keep tryin'! I suggest you put some suspense in the summary- you know. (hey don't get mad at me) WELL... THERE! KEEP UP! Goin to read more ov ur stories. _ Byeeee!

Hmmmm...very sweet story. i like it. thats all i have to say.