Reviews for Reconstructing Oneself

Reviews For: Reconstructing Oneself - Reviews: Page 1 of 9

DeltaKyuubi 2008-07-11 ch 7,	abusecool story pretty unique
Chris ShadowMoon 2008-06-20 ch 7,	abuseThis is annoying. You write, then go really dark, then go cliffhanger, then stop. Please pick this back up. It's great, but I want to know what happens next
Asgeras 2008-05-18 ch 7,	abuseAnd there goes another one... It was interesting to read this fic, since this was one of your earlier works. And it definitely shows, since your writing style has improved a great deal as your writings have progressed. In fact, I even saw a great deal of improvement within as this very fic progressed. Kudos. That doesn't mean that this fic doesn't have problems. It's definitely a little more problematic than some of your other fics. For instance, in this last chapter the main thing that popped out in my mind was wondering why Cologne instantly trusted a shadow creature which she never had any previous experience with. Overall, I've really enjoyed this fic and do hope to see you continue it. That being said, I hope to see your Ranma/Robotech fic updated first, but still... Thanks again for posting your fics.
... 2008-03-15 ch 7, anon.	abuseYou can't leave us with a cliffhanger like that.
zaltran 2007-11-04 ch 7, anon.	abuseI just reread the entire thing and I just gotta say that its long overdue for an update. Keep up the good work...
Taeniaea 2007-08-17 ch 7,	abuseGreat Story!!
ShadowDragonGX 2007-06-24 ch 7,	abusecool, update soon please.
Alex Ultra 2007-06-07 ch 7,	abuseI want more of this story. hint hint nudge nudge wink wink poke poke cliche'd-euphemism cliche'd-euphemism I'm starting to like how you're dragging Ryoga into all of this, and if you do it right... 'nuff said. Personally it's starting to seem as if the odds are against Ranma, right now about the only think keeping Cologne away, it seems, is her own unnatural calm in the face of a possible fear-feuled explosion on Ranma's part. Some things in the premise seem shaky, and it seems nearly the entire Ranma 1/2 cast seems to have been put through the metamorphosizer, but irregardless it's turning into an interesting story. ^^? I really like Brothers United, but this story has merit as well. :D Alex Ultra: Foer Sait Few Trues LATER
small error 2007-06-01 ch 4, anon.	abuse"The same drug that was used on you was 'recently used on your son recently', right now, there is little I can do to help him but he will need your support."
cloudshape 2007-02-25 ch 7, anon.	abuseI like it. Please write more.
Karuma Kinsei 2006-12-28 ch 7,	abuseNice story, your a good writer. Very few people can crossover properly, let alone do it while distorting and recreating the characters. Which you are doing well.
Princess Asuna 2006-12-06 ch 7,	abusewow nice story so far, and the plot seema very deep and if ryouga is indeed ranmas true father, that would mean he too has a hidden past, a cleavery and sneakey idea, and one that i rather love the idea of. I do hope you DONT intend to give up, on this story casue i REALLT REALLY wanna know what happens next. Keep up the good work and keep writting or else ill have washu chan turn you into a Kappa LOL. Peace Love and MOOGLES!!
Natalie-E-G 2006-08-15 ch 2,	abuseI am not sure if I like your story yet, BUT, I will say it has one of the most plausible lines I have EVER seen. Ranma had finally finished crossing the lake. She crawled onto the shore now clad in the tattered remains of her red shirt and her boxers; having lost her pants when they were snagged by something that she thought was a monster. [and here it comes folks] So she did the sensible thing and let the monster keep them. I love it.
Kitsune6 2006-08-03 ch 7,	abuseI like this story a lot. Definitely unique. Nice writing, and this chapter was better proofread. I'm putting this on my alert list, keep up the great work. =)
me 2006-07-08 ch 7, anon.	abusethis story started as an ok attempt, but it gets worse and it keeps going, not only things seem to get more and more forced the whole deal with Nabiki has been soo forced that its annoying. The rest of the story is the same the characters are soo forced and occ that they have nothing to do with the original ones. ranma is nothing but a whinny girl and the rest of the tenchimuyo cast are nothing but idiots with the crappiest security ever seen. this story is a big dissapointment

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