 Kanemoshi 2009-11-21 . chapter 8This was an absolutely adorable story! *squeals* I loved every minute of it!! *blushes* and the thought of those movies...*dies a happy pervert* YOSH! |
 Ryomarox 2009-10-03 . chapter 4I can't find the smutty part on Aarinfantasy and the email didn't work. Can you send me the part from here?I'd really appreciate it!:) |
 SorryImLate 2009-08-31 . chapter 4I love this story, it's so unique and exciting ! I've never read anything like this before. I have to admit, I took time to sign into aarinfantasy to read the smut, though I'm afraid I'm not as familiar with that site to 'know how to comment' there just yet xD Anyway, it was a lot better than you had 'warned it to be' xD, you're a very talented writer and this is definitely one of my favourite stories.
Anyway, back to the story ! ^^ |
 Sejitsu 2009-08-31 . chapter 8Very original! :D I really adore your style. It has just the right amount of clever humor mixed in with awesome characterization and an interesting plot. I'd love to see more KakaIru stuff from you. XD |
 mollypocket 2009-08-07 . chapter 8Great story. I love that Jiraiya got them on tape in the woods. ahahaha. Really, I loved it! |
 mollypocket 2009-08-07 . chapter 5Iruka is a god. lol
Awesome. :D |
 mollypocket 2009-08-06 . chapter 1Ha. This is awesome. Great idea! And I love the writing style. It's kind of documentary-like. I love it so far! <3 |
 copperwind 2009-07-30 . chapter 8love the story~ i love kakashi x iruka ;) |
 Fire x Ice 2009-07-27 . chapter 8hilarious and wonderful <3 |
 NarutoVixin 2009-06-21 . chapter 8dang and i was wishing for more oh well i loved it and there were only a few small miss spelled words per chapters and its well put together |
 Shi-koi 2009-06-07 . chapter 8*heart*
--wibbles--
That was perfectly delicious!
I loved the hide-and-seek aspect of the game, and Iruka teasing Kakashi out into the open with Genma and Raidou was wonderful.
Black market tapes. --snicker-- Pimpy!Tsunade. --roffles--
*heart* |
 Lady of the frozen black flame 2009-05-23 . chapter 8Wah, awesome! |
 the Sin Hunter Alchemist 2009-05-09 . chapter 1As a rule, I don't review often. I'm worried that it would become nothing but the simpering of a fangirl (and lets face it, most of what you'll read on fanfiction dot net is either the same as half of everything else or just not that great).
I'm only on the first chapter, of course, but so far this story is rather unique. The action that got me to review, however, was Kakashi giving Iruka the note. It was oddly in-character.
I also loved the comment about setting things on fire to see what's flammable. That was just wonderful.
(I'm writing a story right now revolving around a 16 year old Iruka and whenever he summons what will someday be his "teacher glare" or his "teacher voice" I mention how the jounin and children will someday react to it (and why Kakashi was an idiot for not reacting to it accordingly). Through writing this, I realized that the two groups are extremely similar. It was a fun revelation, wasn't it?)
~ Sin-Hunter |
 VixenFreia 2009-05-04 . chapter 1all i can say is.. NICE..^_^ |
 kerumica 2009-03-04 . chapter 2I must admit that I started reading this story before but was getting a little confused by the various breaks for explain jounin and their eccentricities. I'm glad I continued this time around. I'm really getting excited with this storyline. |