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skenshingumi
2008-01-14 . chapter 6
Interesting ending. It seems they have an uneasy truce. I wonder how Kaoru will handle that. I do like how you had her surprise Battousai with her hug and deep emotion.
I do have a problem with one line in this chapter. That is "Suddenly the killer of legend, one who had slain countless men for no gain but to test his skills, was dumbfounded." Battousai did not kill so casually as to test his skills but on orders from his commanders on his theory that they would be able to identify those people preventing the revolution. Of course that was a simplistic and wrong-headed idea but he was never casual about it, in my opinion.
I hope you write more RuroKen. You write well and stay true to the characters.
skenshingumi
2008-01-14 . chapter 3
I like the good build of eeriness in this chapter. The oil lamp playing on Kenshin's face was a very effective mood setter. I also like how that menacing image unsettled Kaoru.
skenshingumi
2008-01-14 . chapter 2
I am enjoying your story so far and am especially happy to see it listed as complete. It seems lately I find a story only to have it never finished. It is also refreshing to have everyone as themselves not as vampires, werewolves etc.
I had to comment on the last line in this chapter. I assume you mean Kenshin acted as a nurse not a wet nurse as a wet-nurse is a women who breast feeds someone else's baby. Or are you saying that Kenshin has to mother her? The idea of Kenshin acting as a wet nurse just seemed so odd that I thought I’d let you know.
Forever Dreamin
2007-08-25 . chapter 5
I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Ohagi-chan
2007-03-05 . chapter 4
Creepy. . . I wonder who the mysterious person is? Dun Dun Dun. . . Until next time! Sayonara! - Ohagi-chan
Sakuya Kaleido
2007-03-05 . chapter 4
love your stories keep em coming!
gabyhyatt
2007-03-04 . chapter 4
good chapter
ChildlikeEmpress
2006-10-13 . chapter 3
This is really good! Please continue. I'm definately intrigued as to waht could be "stalking" kaoru. Is it a ghost? perhaps we will find out soon.

~ChildlikeEmpress
sasukeluver101
2006-10-13 . chapter 3
I love your story so much! I really super-diduper hope that you update soon! =) That would really make me so delighted! *^.^*
gabyhyatt
2006-10-13 . chapter 3
good fic
Arwey
2006-10-13 . chapter 3
An update! Awesomeness! I was just getting ready to write you off as lost, and lo, a chapter is posted. I enjoyed the suspense in this chapter, and I hope you won't leave us hanging for too long (i.e. update soon please!). Until next time- Ja!
Arwey
2006-09-23 . chapter 2
More please! I love this story and am eager for info on Kaoru's ghostly intruder. Please update chp 3 soon!
Sessha
2006-07-14 . chapter 2
Kawaii! This is so sugoi story =) Please update soon again! I can`t wait till the next chapter.
Kenshin is so sweet as always... nursuring Kaoru x) I wonder who -or what is it that is haunting Kaoru... More please!!
GERHDFGN
2006-07-12 . chapter 2
this looks good so far, a bit scary though, that figure is creepy, i like your style of writing its really good. keep it up.
luv Faina
Arwey
2006-07-12 . chapter 2
*claps* Yay, an update! I have no time to write this, but be assured I still love your story!
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