AWSOME! I'm so glad you put in a few fight scenes. you described them really well too! They'er hard to write. I'm glad you took it on and didn't just say 'and then mugen killed them' like most people do. Loved the ending. I really aprreciate the lack of musshyness. Mugen and Fuu are a hard pair to write, its always too fluffy or to dark, but I think you found the perfect medium. I hope to read more from you. You've got talent.

I'm only on chapter two but I wanted to give a reveiw. I really like the story so far. I like the way you wrote for Mugen. Most storied are more from Fuu's pov so its nice to see someone do Mugen and do it well. I laughed out loud quite a few times. Looking forward to reading more.

I'm surprised I haven't found this fic before. :D Good job, I loved it.

Hello, Citadel. This is old, and you were unsettled due to The hurrican so don't know if you still keep tabs on your writings here. Like the previous reviewer, I got her accidentally, following leads for good stories by circuitous routes. I have no clue what the original story was about, this is far from the fandom I haunt (ff7 only), but I saw the word s-e-x somewhere, and being in that kind of mood, I decided why not? I'm glad I did, this has been a hoot. And tho I don't think he looks quite like Mugen, of course I picture Mifune because he has the attitude! Thanks, and I hope that things have come 'round for you wherever you are. mc

I definitely loved this. I stumbled on this by accident, just like how I stumbled on Samurai Champloo by accident. I liked how realistically you portrayed them. Great job!

Ah! I absolutely loved this! Awesome job!

Great story!
I totally loved reading this, good job at keeping them in character I think.
Sorry I'm not very good at critiques and long comments, but wonderful story!

Oh lmao. I absolutely love the way you write mugen. It was so fuggen funny. I could definitly see this happening and him thinking he's all that and won "fair and square". Oh man I'm lovin this already.

I thought it was great! Though the entire storyline was very short, it was drawn out very well, and I did love the Ryu-kuuian interpretation of "I love you".

This was definitely a good read. Definitely worth sitting at the computer for the hour it took to read it. You're an excellent author. The end surprised me a lot; I thought you would add a quick lemon and then write a heartfelt conversation between the two, but I found your way to be much better. You seriously know how to end a story. Good job!

hahaha. poor Fuu. great chapter.

Very well put together! I loved that even though there was some fluff, it wasn't really very fluffy...if that makes sence. And it was actually written well! So, congrats! Job well done.

This was nutty! So good!

I love love love your story. It is the first Fuugen fic I've read that stayed completely true to the characters IMO. I would love to read more fuugen from you. What other pairings do you write about? Thanks again for a very enjoyable read.

Oh. My. Holychocostrawberrycreamcakes!

You've made me so happy by writing this fic! I had a crudderrific day today, and this totally gave me a pick-me-up that I so desperately needed. This is definitely one of the BEST Fuugen fics I've ever come across (which is why this story shall be tabbed as one of my favorites)! You have amazing (emphasis on AMAZING) writing talent and a great sense of humor to boot :D There were so many points in this story where I burst out laughing like some deranged person. Good thing I wasn't at school or work when I was reading this.

I'm totally in love with this story. Please, please, please, keep writing whatever you're working on whether it be another Fuugen fic or a totally different story that tickles your fancy. You are so incredibly talented!

I'll be looking forward to any of your future projects! :)