and of course during times of affection the unmoral possibilities of the cloak just vanish

aw

aww... thts so sweet i wish all boy friends were so sweet. loved it . grt work.
-s

Aw! I loved it! A pirates life for me...

aww cutee :]

i LOVE this, you are such a good writer!

Aw thats cute.
They use it together.
And I was thinking he didn't want her to use it because he wouldn't be able to find her.

aw
thats so sweet
he didn't want her to disappear
aw
i loved it (needless to say)
and the part where he thought it was Padfoot
*smiles*

Oh, that was so sweet! I loved the way you linked the end back to the beginning. This was seriously gorgeous.

o...
i want a cloak!
luky lily
wonderful, i loved it soo cute

so cute!OMFG that was awesome! If u wrote that with the aim of making people sigh in happyness and go "aw" u have succeeded.

hehe cute ^.^

woot! Well written!

i almost cried by how cute this was, but then i would have to explain to my brother (also in the room) why i was crying...

cute. really good story :)