evil!

GO GET 'EM, TIGERS!
Ayame and Suzume are just too cute!

My heart rate was going up so high until you went to Kaoru's POV. Then it flatlined... lol

(-grin-) Adorable, Lolo. My favorite line was, "Overpowered by his assailants, Kenshin began to scream." Imagine the girls tickling him to tears is a delightful image.

-laughs- this is great! So cute.
Laters,
KD

How did I miss this? Very cute, I love the tension and intensity of the first half followed by the lightness of the second.

That was really sweet!

wow - this starts of sounding almost a bit dark, but by the end it's completely hilarious (though with a tinge of sadness). i guess i would describe it as simple but pretty ^.^ i love it - nice work!

Aw... that was so cute! Your attempt was a success. I like this one too!:P

AW...hehe couldn't stop myself ^_^

NIce work here... gr8 set up...and then the revelation... the simple yet detailedd prose works well with the scene.

Another fellow drabller...lol.. awesome.

cya

Yay! Lolo has joined the ranks of the drabblers! :D This was adorable, by the way. I love the suspense of an ambush, and the humorous ending to it. I could definitely see Kenshin playing with his "nieces" that way, and the mental image this drabble left is very endearing. Thank you for sharing it with us, and congrats on a first (awesome) drabble! Buwahaha. ;)

This was just precious! If there's anything that could conquer the rurouni, it's his good heart. Glad the little ones found that weakenss, and I hope Kaoru does get a chance to join 'em, too.

Nice for a first timer. This is fun, you should write more of these types of stories.

*mentally shrieks in laughter*

Oh, how cute it is!! At first I thought it has to do with animals, maybe rabbits. ^^; But I wasn't expecting this.

Awesome job! I was glad that I was kept in the dark when you were telling me this. I faved it.

Oh this was so cute! ^_^ I'm so glad you posted!

That beginning part, where I thought Kenshin was being attacked by enemies--and then lo and behold, two little girls! Which can be just as scary. ^_^

As for Kaoru wanting to join-hahahah! Too cute.