 Moi 2008-12-02 . chapter 13 I just found this story, and I think it's amazing! The idea is original, the characters are well developed, and the writing is great. Update soon! |
 Dyna 2008-12-02 . chapter 13 Rather interesting story. I have not usually found one with this kind of balance and connection between Harry and Voldemort and the alternative universe story is great as well. Will they return to Hogwarts. I would like more interaction between Harry/Voldemort and the Tom Riddle in this world. And Severus, Sirius, Remus and James if possible.
The whole two souls in one body, the interaction between Harry and Voldemort and them becaming more close is great. |
 Aisling-Siobhan 2008-12-02 . chapter 13hahaha love that Voldemort's patronus is a goat! :P Also, hate Dumbledore - always will, even if you arent TRYING to make him evil. |
 I-Y-T-Y 2008-12-01 . chapter 13LOL! His patronus is a goat. That just makes me think of Aberfoth Dumbledore! I love it so much! |
 Barranca 2008-12-01 . chapter 13I don't think it's necessary to explain Dumbledore, it's not like he isn't trying to do what's best for everyone (even if it's not best for Harry). Harry scared the wits out of everyone with his display, I get the feeling that he's trying to take all he can from being a child again. What could be more fun than blowing up dementors? :D |
 akuma-river 2008-12-01 . chapter 13Poor Harry.
Does this mean that he can't die, ever? Voldie will drive him absolutely nuts after a hundred or so years, unless he comes to taint Voldie with his goodness.
Hopefully his family and friends can help him.
I am curious, though, how will James react to the fact that he's technically Harry's father and that he can't get with Harry's mom - not just because she's with Snape - because it cause Harry undo pain to have to deal with two Harry's like how Voldie causes Tom some pain...
Or...biologically speaking...he can still get with Harry's mom because at any moment he does that is not when Harry was conceived in Harry's first life would mean it would be a sibling of Harry and not Harry perse... Or something like that. ;d
Still, poor Harry. |
 Lina03 2008-12-01 . chapter 13Wow another great chapter. I can't wait for more! ^_^
(I can't believe it, a goat?! LOL) |
 nxkris 2008-12-01 . chapter 13nice chapter, i love that you had harry destroy the dememtor and that he is admitting the truth. update soon. |
 crazybibliophile 2008-12-01 . chapter 13I can see Dumbledore wanting him out of the school, but I really don't think he would turn Harry in to the Ministry. I think your version of Dumbledore is a lot more callous than twinkly, sweet-loving, give-everyone-fifty-second-chances-even-Voldemort canon-Dumbledore. That's not to say that your version isn't good though - and I love the way you write Harry. And I think you got James perfectly. XD |
 Green.on.Black 2008-11-30 . chapter 13interesting chapter. keep it up! |
 akaren 2008-11-30 . chapter 13loved it!. update soon =) |
 Okane-Tsuki 2008-11-22 . chapter 12You can't end the chapter like that! Come on! The least that you can do is update pretty quickly, right? Please and Thank-You!
-Tsuki- |
 WouldYouLikeAChallenge 2008-11-16 . chapter 12i loved it! but ugh!! dumbledore upsets me so much. please update soon! here, have a cookie |
 Shakatan 2008-11-16 . chapter 12 9/10 for the fic
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 greep 2008-11-15 . chapter 12 What? how could Dumbledore do that? WTF? No! |