They are great, you should really write more. :) x

LOVE IT! wow xander is really protective with madison will u write more stories about xander and madison? (i hope u do:)

Yes!! Go Xander!! Get them boys outta your way! Wow...a foursome? LOL. Great job with characterizing Xander though, please continue with your awesome story.

AW poor Xander!lol Xander/Madison is just so cute. Can't waite for more.

wow xander was kinda forcing to kiss madison omg please continue this cahppie i love it and i wonder wat will happen next! write another chapter plz!

wow i never thought xander would be that nice i mean he's cool but he's too bossy. But i loved the story why don't u do more i mean i think ur really gud. WRITE MORE STORIES PLEASE!
i love xander and madison!

Yay!! A new chapter!! I love how you show that not only are Xander and Madison are physically attracted to each other, but also with each other's personality. It seems realistic that Maddie would be worried and Xander has confidence. Please continue!! You're doing a great job so far!!

AH! you so have to continue!! i love it!

wow, a little character development always makes for a good story, especially when it's written like yours! realistic and something most of us can relate to (not so much power-ranging but the general idea of confidence), it helps me think higher of people i know who aren't confident, enough or as much as i am. we all go through it sometimes, doubt, and regret, and it's nice to know we can pull through.

I've never seen Mystic Force, so I was a little lost on who was who, but it's a very cute story!

So when are ya gonna update? Can't wait!!

Aww...how sweet! I didn't really imagine their first kiss in Xander's house but at least he finally made a move! But what's gonna happen when Nick comes into town?? It's gonna be so weird...but awesome!! Lol...You make it seem so realistic, it's awesome!

wow i would have thought their first kiss would be in a more romantic setting but it's so cool how it's not. xDD aww, you just make this pairing work somehow, you know how to write them to the point where i can see it all happening. kyuute! (:

hey, i love that show! ^^

aww poor Maddie. This felt very realistic. I could really feel Maddie's insecurity and a bit of Xander's needs and confusion. Great job!

ARE YOU CRAZY