Aw nice one-shot. I also thought that this part was funny:

“Eavesdropping is pointless when you don’t speak the language Brian.” He jumped, turning around to see Mia grinning at him.

lol. Oh and thats nice at the end what they said to each that Mia wouldn't tell Brain:

Will you stay with me forever?
Eternity baby.

I think that you should write more Dom and Letty fan fictions!! =) Cuz you did a great job with this one!! =)

This is extremely well written. Wonderful job.
Much Love,
Santiva Potter

THATS CUTE!

bebe de la eternedad means "eternity's baby" you should have said por la eternidad mi bebe i know it like two years late the correction but i jjust like to correct people about there spanish

aw

aw! how sweet!

aw that was sweet

that was the most original most cutest most everything i just really loved this story its one of my favorites

i think that its one of the best DL fics i've ever read.i like how you show dom's sweet side.

~southernbelle84~

That was short and sweet. nice job.

I absolutely adored this. It's so simple and it and it speaks a thousand unsaid words. I think it would be cool if you did write a Dom/Letty story but this is perfect the way it is.

Lex
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That was awesome! Such a lovely perspective on Dom and Letty. That was so enjoyable that I'd love to see more (maybe from a different POV, hint, hint?).

I love it. I think you should write a story about how Dom and Letty got together.

I love this quick Don and letty story. it was great!

Liked it every much. I love Mia's line "As wrong as it may sound, it’s in the bedroom that they prove their love." I think it shows a different and cute version of the "LA's most well known couple" I really liked it. The spanish bit was just so ...hot aha. I also liked how you twisted this in two different routes. One for Mia and Brian but kind of focussed on Dom and Letty. and how you described (well Mia...) they're lovers first and foremost and that for them being together is just a bonus. I really liked it. It brough my droopy day up! =) Good job and I hope you write more fics like these...all the Dom and Letty fans are hidding!