Awesome job! I definitely liked it!

~KWF~

beautifly done...love it!

beautifully written, love this pairing

aww so cute

Oh, this makes me sigh in contentment. The phrasing of “you have conquered me” reminds me of the Cleopatra story in the manhwa (sp?) A Thousand and One Nights; Alexander says something quite similar. It just makes me go squish to hear Alucard say anything of that nature. Wonderful!

Hehehe. Subtle. Stoic. Loved it. Great job.

OMG! i love it! why is it soo short! joo can do better than this! pleaze get to it! at least 5 complete and not short chapters!
vegi

This should be a chapter f.f! not a one-shot! SxA 4EVER!

...that was short...why is this short? you should make it longer...really.good stories should be long. You did really good! I love it.
-western mistress

very sweet.

Ah that was so sweet.

O cool. what happens next?

Very emotional, loved the ending, very angsty atmosphere but hopeful.

Wonderful scene created. Very visual and relatable. Well done.

I LOVE THIS STORY! Ahem. Please, ignore the stars I have in my eyes. They'll go away in...five...four...three...two...one...they're still there?!? Wow! That was such an awesome chapter!