 ashley.marie.anne 2009-07-23 . chapter 26I dont know why im reviewing you havnt updated in like 2 years but this is the BEST outsiders fanfic I have ever read. Seriously the plot is fantastic and your writing is just amazing and I have to say I'm rather dissapointed you never finished it. Oh well sure you have your reasons but really this is just mind blowing amazing. |
 Perfect love kills all fear 2009-04-09 . chapter 26I love this story. Why'd you have to stop writting about it? Seriously, I love how I can relate to the character and all. You make her real, not many people on fanfiction can really do that.
Well, I really hope you update and finish this story.
-PLKAF |
 Perfect love kills all fear 2009-04-09 . chapter 16Hey,
I just had to laugh at FNG. My teacher refused to tell what it meant. I mean, he said "Effing New Guys" so we got the point. We just had our Vietnam unit and I'm actually getting all this stuff and not having to really read your key thing at the bottome. I mean, I still read it but it's nice knowing what things mean without having to look down all the time.
I love her character. No Mary Sue.
-PLKAF |
 Hahukum Konn 2008-12-26 . chapter 26The story feels like it could end here. Bittersweet, like all good Outsiders fics seem to be. :)
But if you plan to continue, I cheer you on and eagerly await the arriving of the Eleanor/Jack ship. :P
Poor El, though, if she's been drinking all that time. :( |
 Hahukum Konn 2008-12-26 . chapter 25:(
At least Steve was being supportive and coming back to his own exasperating self. :P |
 Hahukum Konn 2008-12-26 . chapter 24Whew; I'm glad Steve's back. The dialog between El and Steve seemed a bit oddly unfocussed, though. I'm not sure how to describe it exactly. |
 Hahukum Konn 2008-12-26 . chapter 23El's shock and sadness really made itself felt in this chapter. *sigh* At least Steve will make it back. But in what shape? |
 Hahukum Konn 2008-12-26 . chapter 22Squee! They kissed!
But god, that last part. :( Life sucks for them all sometimes. |
 Hahukum Konn 2008-12-26 . chapter 21Interesting. I didn't expect El to actually take the drug, but damn, expectations aren't everything. :P
Glad to see Two-Bit making an appearance here. He can be insightful at the right times. :) |
 Hahukum Konn 2008-12-26 . chapter 20Glad Darry isn't flying off the handle here. That's good. :) |
 Hahukum Konn 2008-12-26 . chapter 19I always thought GI meant General Infantry. :P Government Issue fits, though :)
Glad to see a nascent romance here, though I suspect that there's some confusion of intentions on both Eleanor's and Jack's parts. I hope they do get married, though. Jack seems like a nice guy. :P |
 Hahukum Konn 2008-12-26 . chapter 18Oh my! :( Poor Sodapop and Steve. Lord, am I glad I ain't living back then if I had to deal with letters like that.
Poor El, too, only getting letters every so often and not knowing what's going on in between. :( |
 Hahukum Konn 2008-12-26 . chapter 17Nice historical touch with the Life magazine :)
I'm glad Eleanor wasn't frightened off by the the VA hospital. That's good. :) |
 Hahukum Konn 2008-12-26 . chapter 16Hah, nice. Small world, eh? I look forward to how this new wrinkle plays out. :) |
 Hahukum Konn 2008-12-26 . chapter 15Too bad Evie felt threatened by Eleanor. Alas.
Yay reunion! Too bad it's only two weeks. :( |