I really love this story.

wow very well done two you for writting something so cute! (and in charater) _

Aw! It's so cute! Good work! 10/10!

Another great story! It was so romantic! I loved Umi's thoughts as the described in the paragraphs starting and ending with "Umi stopped dead in her tracks...They might think she was in love with Clef or something, which was quite impossible, wasn’t it? Wasn’t it?" I LOVE the way her inner turmoiil is depicted and how she almost (!) wants to go back to the way things were before she developed romantic feelings for Clef. And I like the repeated question at the end, cool! The kissing scene was also food for the heart! I like that Clef kissed her hand first, but felt bad for Umi when she suddenly had these doubts afterwards. I'd really enjoy some stories with the taller Clef, but you still made the short Clef work well!

Have you seen the OAV Clef? He. Is. One. Gorgeous. Guy. D

oohh-la-la

what a good fic!

you definitely have to write a story with the OAV Clef because this one was so unbelievably great and because there aren't enough Umi/Clef fics out there!

Great story! Size doesn't matter between Umi and Clef anyway, just that their love for each other is huge!

neat! me and my friend were just giggling over the end. :: aska laugh - AHHHHHHHH hahahahahahahaha HAAAAAAAAHHH! ::

:: SDneko-girl sweatdrops ::

I really enjoyed this story. I love Clef and Umi. They are such a kawaii couple.

KAWAII! This is one of the best romance fics I've ever read!

that's so *snif* romantic!

I loved it...

I hope I can read some more of you're fics...

if i can find them... i'm real bad @ that...

I LOVE THIS STORY! PLEASE write more UmiClef fics!

Ya know, you could write a sequal to this, only with Clef tall. If at all possible, he's cutier that way. Anyways, great story. And BlueDragonGirl did a great job with the ending, too. I loved it!

sweet story. I love Umi and Clef stories