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| Smiffy 2007-07-10 ch 1, | abuseum... Yeah kinda good, too bad that Jolee passed away, the old bugger is cool^^ |
| Rymann 2007-03-14 ch 1, | abuseNeat first chapter. Pretty interesting how long it has been since Revan left. Two kids? Psh, I don't think a Jedi could even handle that. Good work. Can't wait for the update. ~Rymann |
| Vanderslice 2006-08-22 ch 1, | abuseI really like this story. It is sweet, and it makes all of us who couldn't believe Reven left Carth a little happier. However I would have like a little explanation into why she was gone so long, especially if she had twins to worry about. |
| Sugi 2006-04-04 ch 1, | abuseAW! I love it! |
| Amme Moto 2006-03-29 ch 1, | abuseThat was sweet. It's a nice read, really. ^_^ Props! |
| Selena Mars 2006-03-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseSo cute. Carth is still the same as ever and that's the way it should be. Carth is an uptight overly untrusting guy but the right one for her. This is a great story. |
| Hangman By Cent 2006-03-28 ch 1, | abuseaw! i spose that pretty much encompasses my reaction, hey? well, again, good work! i like your style, and will be looking forward to more. ~LFK |
| Gemma Revan Clancy 2006-03-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseI want you to write more of this story because it is so good. |