Really sad story, when I first red I hoped it wont turn out as sisters war, yet it turned out as it did. Worst part is that everything was avoidable, no one was driven by higher motive(not even selfish one), but just pure rage and were victims series of coincidences, thus making every involved party as casualty without potential winner.
I believe its really hard to write about character that has made heavy wrongdoings(specially due to various circumstances) and yet made sympathetic, since its almost canon of genre that such character will have to die due to fact that there cant be atonement for such heavy sins(ex elfen lied(in fact Sitara remained me pretty much of Lucy)).
Imo saddest part of story was fact that guardians had to die in moment they started their path to redemption from hole they sank for past years(specially Irma). Ultimately leaving remaining Will in most tragic possible outcome.

Oh. my. goodness
THEY ALL DIED?!
D=
I was so in love with how you portrayed each character, I couldn't believe they all died. Even if alive in spirit, they're...oh my goodness.
This story, was like how I predicted in our message.
O.O
But I will say once more;
This story is A-M-A-Z-I-N-G
to the G.
=)
-Moonlitewriter-

A highly exillerating and emotional fic, one I'm happy to have read. I loved the way you had the girls fall apart and how they came together at the end. Keep writing. Oh and by the way, don't let the reader/reviewer ratio get you down, most fics have similar ratios.

Aw, poor Will, things aren't going great for her

It's so depressing seeing the guardians like that :(

It's going good ^_^ on to chapter 5 when I finish work ^_^

Intriguing, so much easier to read know that I know the characters not Amandella of course though

Aw you have to feel sorry for poor Cornie, things aren't going too well for her

It's about time I got round to reading this, and properly this time. Might take a while to read it all though ^_^

This is a very well written and heart breaking story. Easily one of the best on this site as far as characterization goes.

this was from the prologue
'It's a wonder I didn't just "off" myself decades ago by now, from the hell I'd been through'

hm, when it says 'off' does that mean .. toppin urself??

Really good! I'll read & review the next 20 chapters...within the next few days. lol :)

~ Emily

Wowza, dot hate Sitara anymore. Dunno why, but i don't
and my final comment for this fic of yours:
wow...just, wow

*stares wide eyed at puter screen*
HOLY SH-

holy shiznic...