I love it... But personally have been in the funk of loving and searching for all Broken/Dark Harry's right now. I really like the ideas you had and after reading all your Harry Potter works I can see I saved the best for last just my luck. I would of loved to see this one as a multi chapter story not a fan of one shots but you have pulled it off really pulled it off with all your one shots great job. I will say after reading your bio there is no doubt in my mind that you will be published some day not with ideas like you have.

Interesting take on the Prophecy... I like how you presented it, with quotes from the Prophecy as dividers. Great job!!

Bu I agree that this isn't something that JKR would do...

Hmm. Well, it was an interesting idea, but it *did* seem to cut it a little fine, at least to me... I dunno. The style was, of course, elegant as always. I liked how the prophecy was imbedded into the fic, and Harry was done splendidly IC. My only real complaint was how two-dimensional Voldemort was, but hey, this is from the person who became addicted to Tom Riddles fics. Good work, as always.

I can't believe you did that to me! Are we not friends? What have I have I ever done to you?

*hugs loopy!Hermione.*

*catches her.*

*pours some weed killer on you.*

*vanquishes.*

A quite ingenious idea, never would have thought of that myself! Brilliant!
Not likely though, I agree...

Interesting idea, and I love the way you have written it. Spelling and grammar immaculate as always, and I commend you for this excellent fic!

good fic

Definitely an interesting idea, even if more than a bit meloncoly.

It was a lot better than anyone would think it is, including you yourself. Very well thought out, as well. I think you're on to something! I hope that Harry doesn't die, either, but rather join Sirius. The veil must have two meanings; pretty much everything else I can think of in the books has two meanings (ex: Ron's broken wand: to erase Lockhart's memory and to allow him to get his own new wand so he'll be more prepared for the years to come [in my opinion]).
Great job, keep on writing!