Please tell me you plan to go on, this is just too good!

Care to continue? I love this story.I like how you developed the relationship through the chapters.

Sweet moments between Terra and Raven. Hmm, do I smell a slash?

AH! I want to know where the key goes!! I wonder what evil plan Slade has worked up now... (“You and Slade never dated, right?” LOL. nice comic-reference.)

Can't wait until Terra meets the Titans. I'm overflowing with anticipation.

-cherry

YAY!! Terra's finally free!

Wow, now I really want to find out what happens when Raven takes Terra back to Titan's Tower.

Oh, I can't wait!

-cherry

Yay! Terra's finally free~~ Def. looking forward to seeing what happens when they get back to the team together. ^^

one word: awesome. This is probably THE best written fan fiction I've ever read.

I'm left with questions (meaning I want you to update ASAP!)
-How will the other Titans react to Terra?
-Will there be BBxTerra, or will BB be dating Raven? actually that seems too backstabberish after what Raven and Terra have been through.
-Terra v. Slade? o, vicious fight.

Hope these questions provide inspiration for your writing.

Wow, so Terra's finally free! Congrats Raven, on a job well done. Although, we'll just have to see how well it had been done (after all, there's always a chance somethign went wrong). A few missing clothes aren't that much of a deal, although they do embarass Raven quite a lot, hehe. :))

Anyway, there isn't much to criticize, perhaps only the long time it took to update and how short the chapter seemed (although in a story this good and deep, any chapter would seem "too short").

Thx again, for this chapter and this incredible story. I'll be waiting for the next chapter. :)

DarkF4s

will i like the story alot and want it to go on but i'm not really sure what can happen past raven taking a naked terra to the tower covered in only raven's cloak.
i don't know maybe some terra/raven or terra/bb or terra/raven/bb.

Wow. Just, Wow.

I agree with DarkF4S - this is enchantingly beautiful. So poetic and deep. LOVE IT.

I really can't wait for another update.

-cherry

And the reign of Trigon begins...

Really like this chapter, even though it was short.

So, do Raven and Terra have a pretty stong mental connection now? Since Robin and Raven have one from just one encounter, I'm beginning to wonder how strong the one between Raven and Terra is...

-cherry

Raven's devotion to Terra is really touching.

Terra's dark past is so sad. It explains a lot of her insecurities about her powers in the show and why she was always on the run.

Whoot! Only her head left.

LOL funny moment with Malchior.

Trigon is coming...

-cherry

Ah! She can mover her foot! Yay.

You got some deep psychological ideas going on in there. This must have been a story you've been thinking of for a while.

-cherry

Short but powerful.

BB's outburst was a bit harsh, but he's hurting, so I'll let it pass. (That was sad, though. Poor Terra)

Loved this line - "Statues don't cry"

-cherry

Again...great.

Deep thoughts on the Earth as a whole and Terra's connection to it. Also nice insight into the minds of Raven and Terra. It's great to see them make amends. ^_^

-cherry

I love the first person POV. It's so much more personal. I also love the pure poetry of your writing.

Awesome!!

-cherry

PS - you're probably going to get a long line of reviews from me. I've just finished reading what you've posted, so I'll go in and review them all now. XD